LJ Idol Week 9- Milkshake Duck- A Kiss is but a Kiss

[lawchicky]

Carl and Sandra tumbled off of the sled at the bottom of the hill, slipping onto the icy snow below them. They laughed, big, uncontrollable belly laughs until they were out of breath. Carl had found himself on top of Sandra as she lay on her back in the snow. He propped his head onto one of his hands, trying not to squish her. Carl watched

Comments

[rayaso]

I loved the way you used the two perspectives. This was very well written. Sandra's trap wound up well, but of course she should never have done it.

[karmasoup]

Wow. Well, I guess that's one way to come up with a baby daddy.

[static_abyss]

Oh, no, Sandra. I can sympathize with her desire to find a good partner and father for her baby, but, oh, no.