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BROKEN, Part 2

Feb 19, 2012 21:54

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stagarden February 21 2012, 00:41:11 UTC

I am particularly fond of future fic, and I really loved this iteration of them. And I REALLY love this Arthur -- both his feelings and his stoicism. A wonderful story!

Broken lawgoddess March 2 2012, 14:15:11 UTC

Thank you, and thank you for all of your help with getting this done.

I always seem to gravitate toward Arthur's POV. I know you love him and are particular about his characterization, so I'm glad you liked the way I did him.

archaeologist_d February 21 2012, 00:49:37 UTC

I love how clever Mordred was about having Merlin think it was Arthur torturing him. Great job.

Broken lawgoddess March 3 2012, 14:16:41 UTC

Thank you for reading!

I did this as a pinch hit, and wrote it in about 16 days, and there were times I thought I wasn't going to make it.

I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. :)

kattyn2308 February 21 2012, 13:30:24 UTC

Amazing story. There is nothing much I can add to what has already been said. I loved it !
I especially loved the part where Arthur explained that Merlin's magic wants him happy and therefore the magic heals his fingers.
Thank you for a wonderful story

Broken lawgoddess March 3 2012, 14:18:20 UTC

It makes me so happy that you enjoyed it. :)

I think hurt/comfort is my favorite thing,and this was my first long story featuring it.

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Broken lawgoddess March 3 2012, 14:20:23 UTC

Thank you so much.:)

I am such a sucker for hurt/comfort, I couldn't even tell you.

I particularly appreciate your comment about the royal household. I wanted Merlin and Arthur to be part of a bigger family.

Thanks again.

itzcoatl February 21 2012, 18:20:14 UTC

Wonderful story. And the characterisation of Arthur was just right.

This line made me go all mushy...the bond between them trumps everything. AWWWW, love it!! Arthur squeezed Merlin’s hands, and dropped to his knees. He looked up at Merlin with all the love and trust of their years together, and said, “Husband. Call the dragon.”

Broken lawgoddess March 4 2012, 15:52:08 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

I'm glad you thought I got Arthur right- I always feel like he's hard to get.

It was kind of a mushy line, but I really wanted it in there. I'm glad it worked for you!