3am random rhymes

Apr 02, 2009 13:46

I was giving Sophie Koh a spin on the cd player, and felt inspired to chuck together a few nonsensical rhymes ( Read more... )

poem, nonsenscial blabber

Leave a comment

Comments 1

Great poem mandiebulsara April 13 2009, 11:13:31 UTC
Hey Flore !

A reflection in the mirror
shows up on the screen
revealing to an audience
of consumer and machine
that through our ordinary tasks
be it the first one or the last
that something simple such as photographs
could be all that's left about our past.

this was my favourite part of the poem, its so true though. Like i notice it now, when im somewhere and somebody wants to take a photo, it becomes an event. Like the actual taking of the photo rather than an experience that just happened on its own without the aid of a camera? that later ends up on facebook?

Great poem. Your reference to this man-machine struggle really helped to exemplify some of the ideals that we see in Dickens novel, 'hard times'.

I liked it.

Amanda x

Reply


Leave a comment

Up