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Rule of the Jungle, Chapter 1 (Part 1)

Nov 09, 2008 21:46

Title: Rule of the Jungle, Chapter 1 (Part 1) (Nanowrimo story 2008)
Author: Layla V
Pairing: Brian/Justin
Fandom: Queer as Folk US
Time-line: Post-513 future
Summary: Justin thinks he knows Brian. But there are some things which can still surprise him to no end.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Don't own them; just love them very very much

( Rule of the Jungle, Chapter 1 (Part 1) )

nano 2008

Comments 4

mdlaw November 10 2008, 04:02:20 UTC

I always knew Brian was a cat person. m :)

spike7451 November 10 2008, 10:19:10 UTC

I am in love with this already. Oh Brian, you are sooooo gone. Little kitty- kat eyes cannot be ignored. :)

sexy_pumpkin November 10 2008, 12:51:29 UTC

Well Im here finally :)
Its 11.50pm, & Im smiling. I loved evey word, its like BK is here with me in my office lol, hes so funny, can't wait till Justin finds out, so much fun.

Im glad its pain & angst free, this is much better.

Onto part 2, IF I can stay awake,,later Jx

herefordroad November 11 2008, 17:05:54 UTC

this chapter was thoroughly enjoyable! it gave me lots of smiles. ted was at his best -

"You're right as always. It's a classic car." He gave him a small smile, his eyes twinkling, and then he blurted out. "Classically old."

and of course, the appropriate and expected kinney response -

"GET OUT!" Brian snarled.

but ted is fast and bold (lol) -

But Ted was already gone, the door closing behind him, the sound of his chuckles fading with his departure.

and there's justin's total control over the great kinney which i love-

"----! Argh. Christ." Why did he do that? Why did he use that tone with him? Fuck. He knew why. Because Brian couldn't fucking refuse him anything when he used that tone of voice. "Fine, but I'm not going there myself. I'll send someone to pick up the paintings and bring them to Kinnetik," Brian grounded. "God, you're infuriating."

"Yeah, I know." Justin chuckled. "I love you too. See you on Friday. Bye."then, enter one small kitten...only fun and trouble can lie ahead! brian lied by omission and i have a ( ... )