One in a million (part two)

[lazah]

Title: One in a million
Pairings: Still not really any pairings.
Rating/Warnings: PG or PG-13 I guess
Summary: "My eyes shot open and I felt like having a really bad fever. This was the worst nightmare ever. My heart broke when I realize it wasn’t just a nightmare, it was reality..."
Author's Notes: I don't own anyone or anything, just my imagination

Comments

[smoshfan143143]

MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[lazah]

I take that as a compliment :D
More is coming soon!

[lazah]

Well, I won't tell if he dies or not.. :D But I know already!
*Trollface*
I like being the only one knowing how this will continue, but then again, I kinda keep changing my story while writing too, when something more interesting suddenly pops up in my head o.o

And thanks, I really appreciate you like it!

[lazah]

Aww, don't feel mean, it has to be said and actually, you're right.
I find it really hard not to make any mistakes, and I'm sure I will make some, being from Belgium and stuff, not even using English in daily life, but if you join a community and want to be some sort of 'writer' in your spare time, I think you should put some effort to it.
I re-read my chapters about 5 times, still not fully satisfied :D

I appreciated your comment soo much, cause yeah, I'm totally new here. But if everyone would spend some more time to the details of their stories, just as grammar and capitalization, it would be way more fun to read, and less more confusing! You didn't overreact, you were totally right. And that's exactly why I love your stories so much too, since you also spend time making sure the basic rules are okay.

[lazah]

Yea, you're like sooo right! I love reading fanfics, it's like an addiction, but a story full of mistakes can make it so much worse.
And I can freak out about some pretty stupid things, like people who never write 'I' as a capital. I just wanna rage around when I see a boring dialogue full of 'and i did that, suddenly i said that, i was there...' Oh god, I think we're sounding like teachers by now, haha :D
Anyways, we understand each other, and I hope the "quality" of the fanfics here will improve again, it's really not so hard to reread a chapter before posting, right :D

[lazah]

I honestly think that they need to put some actual work behind their stories or GTFO.

-And randomly, the 'GTFO!-meme' popped in my head, lol :D
But, I know exactly how you feel and I couldn't have said it better myself.
But you're right, so, people who read this, we don't want to hurt anyone's feelings!
Just tho make sure that is clear.
It's just.. most of the time people have great stories and a very interesting fantasy, and it's sad when that's ruined by tons of mistakes D:

[9800andseagulls]

ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!
TOTALLY SO AWESOME MORE NOW OH MY GOD!
SERIOUSLY WITH THE CLIFFHANGER! YOU MEAN MEAN WRITER!
;D

[lazah]

Ghahaha :D
Ohhhw, how I love comments like these.
I like to make people curious for the next chapter!
I know I'm a little bit of a teasing, mean writer but still, THANKYOUSOMUCH! I'm reeeeaally glad you like it ^^