Clammy hands (One shot)

Mar 20, 2012 02:28

Title: Clammy hands
Rating/Warnings: PG
Summary: "I stepped on the stage, the spotlights shining right on my face. I was scared my nervoursness would take over, but I knew I needed to do this. "
Author's Notes: Sorry if there are any grammar mistakes left, as you may know (or not) English isn't my first, nor my second language. Concrit is very welcome ( Read more... )

ian hecox, anthony padilla, pg, angst, smosh

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orangefriday March 20 2012, 15:26:55 UTC
Oh, wow, all the emotions ...! The build up towards the end was great and I could really feel Anthony's desperation and the moment Ian walked away... I just said, "Aw god... No... " :(

Great job! Amazing! Did you write those song lyrics as well? There were some little grammar slips but I hardly noticed them :P Otherwise, I'm going to read this AGAIN (because I really love it!)

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lazah March 20 2012, 20:33:10 UTC
Yes, I wrote the lyrics as well, and I found that the hardest part to be honest!
Thank you so much, I've read all of your fics and it's an honour that a writer as talented as you think this was good!
Again, thank you sooo much, and if there is a grammar slip which really irritates you, just yell and it'll be fixed :D

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orangefriday March 20 2012, 22:46:11 UTC
The lyrics were my favourite part of this story! You write really well!

Haha, thanks for taking the time to read my fics as well. :P

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usrnamesarecool March 20 2012, 20:16:13 UTC
Oh god, that was so sad but so good! Awesome job :)

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lazah March 20 2012, 20:33:25 UTC
Thank you soooo much!

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9800andseagulls March 21 2012, 11:06:45 UTC
Oh god. Your writing has impressed me yet again. I'm reading this on the way to work. Soo good :D

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lazah March 21 2012, 11:45:59 UTC
Huray for taking away the boredness on the way to work! :D
Yet again, thank you so much, I really love these kind of comments!^^

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shipperr April 11 2012, 21:09:27 UTC
You are my favourite writer.
I love EVERY fic you have written.
You just keep impressing me like no one else does.
And that, missy, you can consider a great honour.

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lazah April 11 2012, 21:18:47 UTC
-Is shocked by how much of an honour that is-
Thankyou, so so so much :3

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