Reflex update - Torchwood

[lazuli_kat]

The final two stories from this collection are on my site: Reflex

Impact is beneath the From Out Of The Rain button.
Mourning Has Broken is beneath the Exit Wounds button.

I hope you've found something in there to enjoy :o)

xxx

Comments

[shakatany]

"Mourning has Broken" is a very realistic (if there are ghosts *g*) to the season finale and I love the title. My only little gripe is that you have Rhys bring in the fish and chips and beer, he sees the ghost and then what? Dose he join the chase or, seeing everyone chasing the ghost, just quietly go home? Or did I miss something?

Shakatany

[lazuli_kat]

He just sits on the sofa with his beer, but you're right, it isn't specifically mentioned until:

"Jack walked stiltedly away from the station and sank onto the sofa beside Rhys, who automatically put a can of beer in his hand"

It's a bit too like the programme itself, ignoring whoever's standing in the background! I might have another look at that, so cheers, Sweetie.

*hugs*

xxx

[kuzibah]

I have a business trip this weekend so I'm going to save these.

Thanks in advance!

[lazuli_kat]

Hope you enjoy them.

*hugs*

xxx

[fide_et_spe]

These are lovely. I can't decide which I liked the most. I think the one after Adrift worked really well, especially as it elucidated the Captain's blog.

It would be nice if you were planning another epic. I remember fondly the many hours i spent addicted to Attrition.

[lazuli_kat]

I'm really glad you enjoyed the stories, thank you for letting me know, and that you have a favourite - it's always nice to hear what particularly worked.

Not quite another epic, but I'm presently writing the end of a new, longer TW story, and I hope to start posting that in the near future. I never put anything online unless it's finished - I can cope with the tons of editing as I go, but the thought of suddenly running out of steam and leaving something undone... Gah!

Thanks again :o)

*hug*

xxx

[fide_et_spe]

Actually I'm glad to hear that, I hate the fact that there are a few WIP's that I like, but some go for weeks on end and don't update, then you have forgotten the story. It is awful though when they literally don't get finished. I really look forward to you longer story.