Comments | lazuli_kat: Torchwood fiction: Hourglass 7/15

lazuli_kat

Torchwood fiction: Hourglass 7/15

Apr 20, 2009 15:03

The latest part of Hourglass is on the EXCESS website.

I'm hoping that this part will be much easier to live with than the last, but the offer of a detail-free spoiler is still open if you'd like to contact me off-lj: lazuli.kat@btopenworld.com

Hourglass: part seven

Enjoy!

xxx

Comments 30

candybree April 20 2009, 16:09:38 UTC

I really hope Jack forgives Ianto for everything and that they can work everything out and be happy together.
Fantastic chapter!
I can't wait for more!!

lazuli_kat April 27 2009, 14:26:23 UTC

I really hope Jack forgives Ianto for everything and that they can work everything out and be happy together

*gives nothing away*

Glad you liked!

xxx

eumelia April 20 2009, 17:27:42 UTC

Okay... okay...
That was brilliant.
I'm so happy about Jack! Poor, poor Ianto, I just want to hold him and tell him everything will be okay.

But it's only half way... and stuff, it can't be okay can it.

I'm trying to be patient for more, but GAH! Hurry up!

This is really really good.

lazuli_kat April 27 2009, 14:28:35 UTC

I'm trying to be patient for more, but GAH! Hurry up!

Did I not mention my six week holiday starting tomorrow?

No! Only joking! Stop throwing things at the monitor!!!

More already on the site. :o)

xxx

seanchaidh April 20 2009, 17:30:17 UTC

I really like your Jack/Ianto interactions. Ye gods, poor Ianto through the wringer. I think he's taking it harder than he maybe should, but Jack will come through. Hopefully. Though that will mean the story is over. Humbug. ;-)

lazuli_kat April 27 2009, 14:31:37 UTC

I really like your Jack/Ianto interactions

That's very reassuring to hear, thank you.

Hopefully

*says nothing; looks innocent*

xxx

seanchaidh April 27 2009, 14:43:21 UTC

Oh, you ARE evil. Awesome!

lazuli_kat April 27 2009, 14:46:01 UTC

That really made me laugh! TYK

xxx

veta_black April 20 2009, 19:31:48 UTC

*flail* Oh, god. XD Easier, yes, but oh, god. I need a hug. Jack needs a hug. Ianto needs a hug.

I think you really capture point of view and ...how to put it... the way someone is thinking, the natural way thoughts race and translate from one topic to another, how topics are thought of... Well, I like reading how you write because it seems realistic and familiar.

veta_black April 20 2009, 19:36:04 UTC

Also, not to blather on, but you do a good job of balancing the emotions/characters/character development with plot. Some writers are good with the plot, others with the perspective/emotional journey, but you do both.

lazuli_kat April 27 2009, 14:35:28 UTC

I need a hug

*hughughughugHUG*

I am so touched by your comments in this and your subsequent post, I can't tell you. Speechless and massively grateful.

*morehugs*

xxx

veta_black April 27 2009, 22:55:14 UTC

Squee! I'm so glad. :3 I always worry that I'm annoying people. XD

better_late24 April 20 2009, 22:38:26 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you posted; I needed this today. Though, I am completely a wreck over what will happen between Ianto and Jack.

lazuli_kat April 27 2009, 14:37:34 UTC

I needed this today

Gah! That doesn't sound good. Here, have some all-purpose hugs:

*hughughug*

Though, I am completely a wreck over what will happen between Ianto and Jack

Spoiler still available, Hon, usual address. Go on, un-wreck yourself!

*hugs*

xxx

better_late24 April 27 2009, 23:33:12 UTC

Yup, was quite the day!

I like knowing the spoiler is there if I need it (and sometimes, in the wait between chapters, I feel like I do), but I'd prefer to watch it develop. If I knew what was going to happen, I wouldn't feel these early chapters so much. And truly, you have such a gift for describing raw emotion that I just want to go along for the ride.