Torchwood fiction: Hourglass 11/15

[lazuli_kat]

The latest part of Hourglass is on the EXCESS website.

Hourglass: part eleven

You might even get to enjoy this bit for the right reasons ;o)

*hugs*

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Comments

[fide_et_spe]

Oh good God, you wrote orange lame porn. That has to be the most orginal smut idea ever. The whole thing was lovely, smut that conveyed some genuine emotion. Thankyou for sentimental Jack and snarky Ianto, that is exactly how I can imagine it being. You managed to use the dreaded three words without it being out of character, which must be difficult.

[lazuli_kat]

I am so relieved it all worked, thank you for your very kind comments, much appreciated.

Oh good God, you wrote orange lame porn

I...really have no excuse.

*hangs head in shame*

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[seanchaidh]

Oooh, the possibilities. :)

[lazuli_kat]

Wait until we get to the taffeta department, then you'll see possibilities!

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"HOUR . . ."

[karyng]

I am with JACK . . .

How did Ianto become so CRUEL ? ? ? ?

Ianto knows that what Jack is offering him is 'exactly'
what he wanted eons before he gained 'full employment'
at Torchwood; so why now ? ? ? After all this time?

Why is he being such a 'w . . . nkr' (wink) ? ? ? ! !

"Eeeeuuuuuuuuuuwwwwwweeee."

Re: "HOUR . . ."

[lazuli_kat]

I have to admit to being a bit bemused here, as Jack is written as completely appreciating Ianto's fears and even seeking to reassure him.

Hmm...I think we'll have to agree to differ on interpretation!

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[eumelia]

What a pleasantly fluffy-angst chapter.
Thank you for this.

On a more personal note, I'm very glad for this respite, I dunno how much longer I could have handled the hard angst without truning into a blubbering incoherent cry-baby.

This is so good!

[lazuli_kat]

I dunno how much longer I could have handled the hard angst...

Yes, I've been very cruel, but I'm glad you enjoyed the respite.

*hugs*

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[lazy_8s]

Awesome chapter! I loved the argument, with Jack wrenching an admission of love from a broken Ianto. The very steamy sex was tinged with just the right amount of sorrow at their uncertain future.

[lazuli_kat]

Hmm, this intrigues me. Certainly shows that perception doesn't necessarily reflect intent. My Ianto is stroppy but yours is broken. If you're right, then Jack is a total git!

Okay, that's it, how else can I torture Jack!

;o)

Glad you enjoyed it.

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