Oh, wow. I knew we were winding down, and I didn't expect the bit about Gray. It caught me completely off guard, and was somehow completely 100% perfect and different. Wow.
I just finished reading the entire story ... I'm torn between laughing and crying and just grinning like an idiot because it was really, really friggin' good. Now I will be sad that it's all over ...
Wow....just wow. I loved Attrition when I read it and was so happy to see you had done another story. I liked this one even better. You captured everyone's voices perfectly and I loved Catherine. I loved the idea of the hourglass! and Gray getting another chance to live the life he should have had. I'm off to read it all again and will be hoping for another story from you.
And absolutely perfect ending. Well done - the clone bit was a little surprising. The hourglass extremely so - and wonderfully bad taste. I was a little lost with Jack's almost memories of I forgive you. What did the photo remind him of? this fiction has kept me riveted since I found it. Marvellous Bravo Have a cup of tea and a lie down, then get going on something else
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Loved, loved, loved the story.
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Well done - the clone bit was a little surprising. The hourglass extremely so - and wonderfully bad taste.
I was a little lost with Jack's almost memories of I forgive you. What did the photo remind him of?
this fiction has kept me riveted since I found it. Marvellous
Bravo
Have a cup of tea and a lie down, then get going on something else
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