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britishwannabe1 June 18 2009, 01:59:08 UTC
"My, what a large nose."

I LOL-ed at this, not gonna lie.

He was sputtering a reply to her rebuttal--the contents of which she couldn't remember anyway--when she saw it glittering in the lamplight. Earlier in the evening, Mulder had removed his jacket, belt, and tie, rolling up his shirt sleeves and unbuttoning the top three buttons of his shirt. Now, as he talked to Scully animatedly, she could make out a thin gold chain around his neck, and when he leaned forward to get his point across, she noticed a man's wedding ring dangling from the end of it, and she remembered what she'd read in the file.

Beautiful descriptions, very subtle but true.

Good job, gurl!

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lazuli_writes June 18 2009, 02:03:25 UTC
Thankee m'dear! I wrote this ages ago, and I didn't want my X-F slot to be empty, so I put this up there. This is probably the newest piece of completed writing - like my endeavors into Harry Potter fanfic, I have scads of scraps and pieces of fic, but very little completed. Anything written before this I don't consider very good, so - yeah. We'll be seeing if I can get some new stuff done soon. :D

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britishwannabe1 June 18 2009, 02:29:42 UTC
Bwahahaha that sounds exactly like me with Bones fic

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lazuli_writes June 18 2009, 02:32:10 UTC
Hooray for sharing bad habits! :D

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sweety167 June 18 2009, 03:06:11 UTC
I like this. A nice, perfectly "sweet" moment in time.

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trustme1013 June 18 2009, 03:58:15 UTC
LOVED the close of this. It's just the thing that Dana might focus on.

AWESOME!

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hoperomantic July 5 2009, 22:39:33 UTC
Oh, that was a very nice little fic. *grin*

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