Comments | lc2l: Boy Falls From the Sky 3/3

lc2l

Boy Falls From the Sky 3/3

Sep 04, 2011 15:57

Fandom: TSN
Pairing: Eduardo/Christy, Mark/Eduardo

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whitedatura September 5 2011, 15:55:53 UTC

Wow, I really liked this - the way you integrated SpiderWardo into the actual TSN verse was great, and Christy as Venom, oh man. XD I loved the Winklevii clones and mastermind!Divya and Eduardo being wrong about Sean's supervillainhood and Mark drugging Spiderman, what even. I also enjoyed the way you addressed Spiderman vs Spider-Man. ;D

lc2l September 6 2011, 11:18:49 UTC

lol, I had not even thought about venom but you're totally right (: All my spiderman knowledge comes from the 3 movies and a book I found called 'So you want to be spiderman' (:
I have no idea which is officially right between spiderman and Spider-man but I liked Spiderman better (:
Glad you liked it, thanks for commenting! \o/

teaheehee September 5 2011, 18:08:06 UTC

0h goodness that was one of the most wonderful things I've come across in ages! Thank you so much.

lc2l September 6 2011, 11:19:22 UTC

Wow, thank you!!!! <3 \o/

torakowalski September 5 2011, 19:59:53 UTC

Ohhh, I enjoyed this so much! I love your Eduardo, with his little quips and his slightly grudging world-saving. And Mark falling in love with Spiderman in his own Mark-ish way was lovely to watch.

lc2l September 6 2011, 11:21:35 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you like the Mark falling in love parts, it was hard to get across in Eduardo's pov so it's good to know it works (:

janonny September 6 2011, 11:28:33 UTC

THIS IS SO AMAZING! I love how you integrated Spiderman so seamlessly into the TSN verse. The humour was hilarious, verging on crack which is the type of humour I adore, and your characterisations under such different circumstances are perfect. I love Mark's blaise attitude to being kidnapped (along with Bill Gates'!), and Eduardo's angry superhero-to-save-the-day-you-assholes attitude. The evolution of Christie was hilarious, and Divya's arch enemy status with his Winklevii clones (GENIUS!) was an awesome touch. I love how ridiculous some of their circumstances were, which fits a superhero story completely, and your action scenes were so much fun and very well done!

TL;DR babbling: I LOVE THIS! \o/

yellowwolf5 September 6 2011, 17:29:03 UTC

spiderman!Eduardo is my favorite thing ever ♥ Great fic! Loved Eduardo trying to balance being Spiderman with, well, everything else. Poor Mark, constantly in need of being rescued. hahaha. Enjoyed reading this ♥