This was wonderfully brave writing. The ending was heartbreaking but also perfect so major kudos to you for sticking with it. ♥ That said, Wardo nooooooooo ;___; Also, your world-building was great!
I cried. A lot. I'm still crying to be honest... Such a wonderful story. Beautifully written. You ripped my heart outta my chest and I may have hated you a little along the way for making me cry so much (I'm a messy crier, dammit!) but still... This was so emotional and it's the first time I can connect with Mark so much so I definitely don't regret reading it. You're a wonderful author, this is my first time reading you but you bet your talented little brain it's not the last. Gonna stalk your lj now, better get used to me ;D
I am still crying even as I am typing this comment. WHAT THE HELL just happened to my eyes?? it's like a flood coming from inside my brain. I would totally believ thats what wardo would do if he really is a robot, giving all of himself out for Mark. It is just wardo-behaviour I want them to have forever. I want to jump into the article and lock them into a safe and never let wardo offer himself. But I can't, just like so many other things I cannot do. Forgive me for saying nonsense, but I am still crying.
BUT I ALSO LOVE YOU. FORGIVE ME FOR TYPING IN ALL CAPS. OMG OMG OMG. THIS WAS SO ~GOOD. THE WAY THEY FELL IN LOVE AND THEIR KISSES AND THE HOT SEX AND THE TOUCHING OF HAIR AND HUGGING AND REALISING WARDO CANNOT ACTUALLY BE SHUT OFF AND- AND- AND ~STUFF. THIS WAS SO AMAZING AND ADORABLE, AND THEN YOU TOOK IT ALL AND TURNED IT AROUND IN ONE HEARTWRENCHING TWIST, WHEN I WAS SO ~HAPPY, PLAY, SO HAPPY BECAUSE THEY WERE THE CUTEST AND WARDOBOT IS THE ABSOLUTE BEST BECAUSE IF ONE OF THOSE TWO IS A ROBOT IT'S MARK RIGHT AND EVEN WHEN HE'S A ROBOT, WARDO IS STILL SO MUCH BETTER AT BEING A PERSON.
Oh God. I guess I just want to say I LOVED THIS. You are the awesomesaucest, play. *____* Also, so much joy for how well you incorporate canon into your fics! *applauds forever* *cries*
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WHAT THE HELL just happened to my eyes?? it's like a flood coming from inside my brain.
I would totally believ thats what wardo would do if he really is a robot, giving all of himself out for Mark. It is just wardo-behaviour
I want them to have forever. I want to jump into the article and lock them into a safe and never let wardo offer himself.
But I can't, just like so many other things I cannot do. Forgive me for saying nonsense, but I am still crying.
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Oh God. I guess I just want to say I LOVED THIS. You are the awesomesaucest, play. *____* Also, so much joy for how well you incorporate canon into your fics! *applauds forever* *cries*
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