Learning To Ride [Cookleta] [PG]

Jul 05, 2011 12:24

[title] Learning To Ride
[author] Lire Casander
[beta] Unbeta'ed. Any mistakes are my own fault.
[pairing] David Cook/David Archuleta
[rating] PG
[word count] 207
[summary] Not only was he on top of a motorbike - one of those evil artifacts his parents had always warned him about - but David Cook was sitting just behind him, as close as humanly ( Read more... )

david cook/david archuleta, prompts, fic

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lire_casander July 5 2011, 15:48:01 UTC
Thanks! I hope that image is, at least, a little bit hot around the edges :-P

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asweetdownfall July 5 2011, 15:52:18 UTC
jsadfldasjlfjdslfdslajfls/da THIS IS AMAZING. *__________* And so cute, awwww.

Truth be told, he probably would have minded if any other person had been behind him on a motorcycle, but Cook wasn't anyone - he was just Cook. And that was more than enough for him.

^ My favorite lines. <333 And of course the ending is A+++.

You did a fantastic job with the prompt! Thank you so much :D :D :D :D

brb, adding this to my memories.

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lire_casander July 5 2011, 20:07:07 UTC
I'm glad you don't think it's way too late to write this prompt you probably had forgotten about :-P

I think it's the best I could do with such a prompt, so many possibilities, but I wanted to keep it as simple and sugestive as possible without showing much.

Oooh, memories! Thanks!

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rajkumari905 July 5 2011, 16:52:06 UTC
Cuuuuuuute!

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lire_casander July 5 2011, 20:07:19 UTC
Thanks, love!

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bigwhoop4u July 5 2011, 17:06:32 UTC
I loved this! I can totally picture this in my mind. And this line:
"Riding a motorcycle wasn't the only thing Archie learnt that afternoon." Unf!!

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lire_casander July 5 2011, 20:08:10 UTC
It's quite a graphic prompt. I could see them in my mind as I was writing it! Thanks!

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abovetheruins July 5 2011, 20:51:33 UTC
Um, this idea needs to be expanded on. Like, a lot. And in excruciating detail. Yes.

sldfldfadlad ilu for this, Lire <3

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lire_casander July 6 2011, 07:49:43 UTC
If you want to expand on it, you're welcome! I won't write anything else in this verse - my muse isn't keen on writing anything above PG-13 these days.

Thanks! *hugs*

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