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Puppy-dog Peristance (3/3)

Mar 22, 2010 22:56

TITLE: Puppy-dog Persistance
PAIRING: Merlin/Arthur
RATING: NC-17
WORDS: Overall 12,000 (*face palm*)
GENRE: Modern AU, romance, slash
DISCLAIMER: I own nothing.

WARNINGS: Underage - depending on where you're from (Merlin's 17), explicit sexitimes

SUMMARY: When Arthur finds out that his one-night stand is only 17 years old, he does everything in his power ( Read more... )

fandom: merlin, arthur/merlin, fanfic

Comments 79

fresica March 23 2010, 04:53:24 UTC

lol Oh, Arthur... trying to resist Merlin's charms - silly boy! ♥ I would love to see Merlin meet Uther, in this 'verse. I'm not sure who would be more tense: Merlin or Arthur... (And I'm sure Morgana would just laugh. Possibly with Leon.) Clearly, I think this is too adorable for words.

lcacbc March 23 2010, 12:57:23 UTC

Merlin meeting Uther...LOL. Arthur would probably have some sort of stroke.
Thanks!

dk323 March 23 2010, 05:42:57 UTC

This was a really sweet story. ♥ I loved how persistent Merlin was and how poor Arthur eventually just couldn't resist him (of course, he couldn't ;)). I like that Arthur was freaking out about the whole thing, which definitely makes sense in his position. At least Merlin wasn't willing to give up - and he was persistent in a cute way, I suppose? ;)

I enjoyed reading this and I'm glad for the happy ending with both admitting their feelings for each other. :)

lcacbc March 23 2010, 12:59:40 UTC

Nobody can resist Merlin for long - I would have jumped him within the first ten seconds ;) But yeah, I hope you found him cute, cos I didn't want him to come off as just plain creepy...XD

lady_drace March 23 2010, 10:24:00 UTC

Aaaaww, I love this so fucking much! :oD

lcacbc March 23 2010, 13:00:10 UTC

Thank you! XD

becsx March 23 2010, 10:28:03 UTC

OMG! This was so great! I loved Arthur freaking out and how Merlin kept bugging him anyway LOL!
I'm so meming this for future flailing because really, this was amazing! *claps*

lcacbc March 23 2010, 13:01:44 UTC

Merlin annoys Arthur (while Arthur grumbles in irriation) no matter what universe you put him in ;) I'm glad you liked!

sallyna_smile March 23 2010, 10:59:45 UTC

This was sooo great!
It didn't feel much like QAF, you were great to tell their own story, so that I could only see M/A and no one else ♥

lcacbc March 23 2010, 13:03:48 UTC

No, it wasn't intended to be an exact follow of QAF, but there were similarities I couldn't ignore (the office thing for one) XD QAF was def inspiration though! I'm glad you enjoyed! :)