+ i wrote stuff +

[lchan18]

i'm trying to write more. here are the results. despite this only being a mere first draft, it took approximately two weeks or so -_-;

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[drowning_london]

Oooh I really like this! It's weird, but you know how most stories need a good, seamless flow to work? This seems to be... stiff, jerky in a way, but it's perfect, like it just needs to thaw out a bit but it totally communicates how these boys feel.

<3333 Much love!