Damsel in Distress

Mar 03, 2012 10:29

Written for the prompt "dog in the snow".

Title: Damsel in Distress
Series: Tales of the Abyss
Length: 675 words
Genre: General, Fluff, Friendship
Characters: Natalia, Guy
Summary: Females of all species adore Guy.

Damsel in Distress )

toa: guy, toa: guy/natalia, toa: natalia, tales of the abyss

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mangosherbet March 13 2012, 00:18:12 UTC
Gosh, I haven't used LJ since the big move over to DW, but I'm dusting off this account just to comment here. You have utterly sold me on this pairing...I've gone through your entire ToA tag (having just finished the 3DS port, of course) and your FF.net stuff, which is actually how I found this blog. I am going to quietly sit here and roll around in all these feelings you've given me.

You write them both very well--though I do think your Guy could bear to ramp down the 9000+ charm levels, but that's personal taste--but most importantly, you write well, period, which is exceptional in fandom authors and so, so refreshing. I could read this all day. I am a sucker for believable banter, and I am also a sucker for competent!Natalia, so hey, combo deal. Please write more, I'm looking forward to it.

/sits here, tracks like a creeper... |D;

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mellowcandle March 14 2012, 21:24:06 UTC
Thanks very much for reading and commenting! I've been told my Guy is too charming all the time, and I try to work on that and tone it down, but... it's just so much fun to write. I'm trying to be more aware of it, though, and make my characterization more well-rounded.

I really appreciate you stopping by. Comments like yours always make my day.

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