Comments | le_stupidkid: boobs coming out +1

le_stupidkid

boobs coming out +1

Aug 14, 2012 19:31

Tittle:boobs coming out+1
Writer:Le
Pairing:inoobu
Rating:NC-17

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inoobu

Comments 17

izumichan560 August 14 2012, 19:12:45 UTC

*dies* DAAAAAAMN that was hot XDD There are some grammar/spelling errors here and there, but overall it was nice~ :3

le_stupidkid August 15 2012, 07:50:00 UTC

ehhh really i hate it >

izumichan560 August 15 2012, 07:53:42 UTC

Don't hate it~! *hugs*

le_stupidkid August 15 2012, 08:05:04 UTC

*hugs back*Ehhh ok I'll try not to hate it :))

newsjump August 16 2012, 03:09:17 UTC

InooBu smut O_O *nosebleed*
NC-17 is really not my genre and I admire fanfic writers who can write one.
goodjob *pachi pachi*

btw I added you as friend XD

le_stupidkid August 16 2012, 13:31:28 UTC

HIHI thank you very muchh!!!>

alois_trancy October 13 2012, 09:00:17 UTC

THIS IS askldfiow48357rndjksf(#&(#*#(
SO HOT!!

le_stupidkid October 13 2012, 23:37:38 UTC

Thanks for reading ;)

fheb_totx October 13 2012, 11:56:37 UTC

The only thing I could say ..

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT~

le_stupidkid October 13 2012, 23:39:45 UTC

Really?hihi thanks for reading

kodochalover November 16 2012, 02:29:34 UTC

Some inconsistencies here and there x3 like the Inoo being "wet" part near the beginning (it has to be one or the other lol), but other than that, you have a good plot going xD and I like your choice of words :3

Good job^^

le_stupidkid November 16 2012, 08:54:44 UTC

really i use simple word only but thanks for reading :))

kodochalover November 17 2012, 05:22:14 UTC

but sometimes simple words work best with these kinds of topics xD
but i also suggest you research some more about smut at least x3

Good luck^^

le_stupidkid November 19 2012, 11:01:37 UTC

haha thanks i should ohh thanks for commenting :))) im le btw :D!!

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