SMILE HOSTAGE REFUGE [prelude]

[leadenguide]

Title: Smile Hostage Refuge
Pairing: Craig Mabbitt & Max Green
Rating: R
POV: Craig's
Summary: Hands down, "foul play" and "signs of a struggle" are the most terrifying words I have ever heard. 
Disclaimer: Fake.

By the time I arrive, it’s far too late - or so they tell me. ‘They’ being the FBI and crime scene investigators currently picking gingerly

Comments

[shadefur]

I really like this and will love to see where you take it! Poor Max!

[leadenguide]

Thank you! :)

I just love hurting him; it's awful.

[shadefur]

I think I like the fics where he gets hurt more than the ones where he doesn't. People are just so horrible to him. lol

[leadenguide]

I'm that way, too. Thanks for commenting, love. <3

[x_sweet_memory]

Awwwe!
Poor Craig and Bryan and Robert! ><;
AND MAX. of course. Haha.

Looking forward to more! This is awesomee :D

[leadenguide]

Thanks, dear! Your icon is cuuute. :3

[x_sweet_memory]

You're welcome! :)

Ahaha thanks, I got it off of... LJ somewhere.. I think.
And I love your's too! :3

[alexandroid11]

And so begins the legacy of another ETF slash community.
Good luck :)

Story's got good in the extreme evil of it all... Will definately be looking forward to a new chapter release!

[leadenguide]

If I have my way, this won't be just "another ETF slash community." The band is pretty much my life, and I'm kind of hoping this will kick ass. ^_^;;

Thank you! You can expect the new chapter Tuesday-ish.

[sleeponrooftops]

aj;dfkja;ds, ronnie.
-seethes-

♥this.
like, insanely so.
i'll end up tearing out my hair over max, though, =/
he's so goddamn adorable, mm.

also, ♥you for making this, i'll ferdef get my etfslash on, :D

[leadenguide]

//squeeeeee

I'm so stoked for you to get your etfslash on. Hurrah!

[vvmadp]

So, I don't know these characters--I'll start by saying that. I'm thinking it's an Avenged Sevenfold fic? I'm going to Google them right now.

Okay, looks like "Escape the Fate"? I Googled the characters. Craig Mabbitt? Totally hot. Dude. Now I'm listening to them on YouTube. (You have good taste in music.)

Now on to the important stuff...

Holy shit, sweetie. I knew you'd be a good writer. I knew you would be--I just had this feeling. But JESUS. You blew me away. Seriously, I can't even tell you how good this is. I love, love, love the descriptions. The raw emotion? Damn. I'm jealous, I'm not even going to lie. This is powerful stuff. You're amazing. You had me at the first line:
By the time I arrive, it’s far too late - or so they tell me.

Also love the emotion/description of this:
“Ronnie, yeah,” Robert volunteers easily, but I can hear the wince in his voice; I don’t think this will ever cease to be a sensitive subject. “He won’t be out until December, so.”

I'm on to the next chapter!

[leadenguide]

Oh my gosh. I never once expected you to read this. You are by far the best ever. Only a great friend would delve into a fanfic from a fandom they aren't remotely familiar with. I feel so blessed. And so excited, because I haven't had a review in forever and I had forgotten just how electrical it feels. ♥

Yes, Craig is loovely. He also used to sing in bands blessthefall and The Word Alive. :)