smile hostage refuge [chapter one]

[leadenguide]

Title: Smile Hostage Refuge
Pairing: Craig Mabbitt & Max Green
Rating: R
POV: Third & Craig's
Summary: 'Hey, are you okay? You look pretty low.'
Disclaimer: Fake.
A/N: Title and summary lyrics belong to The Used.

When he awakens, it’s to complete darkness and the feel of fabric against his eyelashes. His mind is hazy and he’s more than a little

Comments

[bekahftw]

yeah so, I think I just fell in love :D
Poor Maxxxxxxxieeeeeeeeeee ;[

“He left behind enough DNA to make a baby.”

LMFAO, Idk why, butttttttt I loved that part. ahaha.
MORE PLS PLS PLS MORE. (:
<3

[leadenguide]

N'aaww, thank you! <3
Soon soon, m'dear.

[bekahftw]

You're welcome(:
And I am veryy impatient, just so you know(;
<3
Hehe :D

[leadenguide]

I am, too.
Maybe I'll update just because I like your icon so much. Who are those lovely looking kids?

[vvmadp]

(Ah ha--I was right about the band! Yay!)

“Him?” I dead-pan.

“Inexperienced and thoughtless,” Stenson agrees. “He left behind enough DNA to make a baby."

I laughed out loud. I loved that. I love crime shows, and then to hear that... It just made me laugh.

Also, this part:
There is a moment of silence while his captor disposes of the needle.
Was really, really visually... perfect. (I was going to say "stimulating" but I thought that had a connotation I wasn't sure I liked...