Smile hostage refuge [chapter two]

Nov 19, 2009 12:40

Title: Smile Hostage Refuge
Pairing: Max/Craig, Max/Ronnie
Rating: R
POV: Third
Disclaimer: I do not know any of the people in this fic. Title belongs to The Used.

Max is acutely aware of a couple things in particular: his feet are freezing (was he ever wearing socks?), his veins are burning with a dirty want, and he’s goddamned tired of being kept ( Read more... )

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leadenguide November 20 2009, 01:04:30 UTC
Hey, see my icon? It's for you.

I've got the next two chapters done, so speedy updates are comin'. I'm actually wicked excited.

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x_sweet_memory November 19 2009, 22:11:23 UTC
Nicoleeee.
THIS IS AWESOME.
Except.
Max is all tied up and strange men are doing bad things to him. D:

WHEN IS CRAIG GONNA BUST IN AND SAVE MAX'S ASS?! lmfao. ;D
update like mega soon. :P

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leadenguide November 20 2009, 01:03:41 UTC
I KNOW, RIGHT?
Updating SOON, I promise. I'm excited.

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ex_ajokerca November 19 2009, 22:40:46 UTC
EEEEEE

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leadenguide November 20 2009, 01:02:59 UTC
:D

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alifeofourown November 21 2009, 09:49:56 UTC
I...uh...
O.O
*goes to read third chapter*

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vvmadp June 3 2010, 06:45:15 UTC
Woah, dude.

I seriously (literally, seriously) started squirming uncomfortably in this chapter. It was... intense. Intense and strong and vivid and... really painful. I mean, I could actually FEEL what he was going through, which was... really traumatic and horrible, actually. I really wanted to stop reading (which is a compliment, I promise!!) because it felt so real. So horrific. So I'd like to tell you that it was beautifully written (because it was) and that I'm in awe (because I am) but I'm mostly just really praying that it all ends okay...

On to the next chapter!

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