smile hostage refuge [chapter three]

Nov 20, 2009 02:29

Title: Smile Hostage Refuge
Pairing: Max/Craig, side dish of Max/Ronnie
Rating: R - beware of the noncon.
POV: First & third
Disclaimer: Fake. Title belongs to The Used.

Prelude | One | Two

“Ronald Radke?”

“...Yeah?”

“ I’d like to ask you a couple of questions.”

Ronnie glances warily at the police badge being presented and slowly sits down, ( Read more... )

smile hostage refuge, fanfic, escape the fate

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leadenguide November 21 2009, 17:05:38 UTC
Yes ma'am. (:

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alifeofourown November 21 2009, 09:56:18 UTC
fuckyoufuckyoufuckyou
I need more
Your writing is like the drug that Mathers shoots into Max's arm.
FUCK YOU!
Ahhhhh!
*is so far gone that she can't focus on her NaNo anymore*

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leadenguide November 21 2009, 17:05:14 UTC
Woo! :D *bends over for fuckage*
You get moar soon bb.

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alifeofourown November 21 2009, 17:20:45 UTC
*snuggles instead*
I had better!

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leadenguide November 21 2009, 19:06:49 UTC
PFFFFFFFFFFFFF.

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leadenguide November 21 2009, 17:04:27 UTC
Fanks :3

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vvmadp June 3 2010, 06:55:28 UTC
I'm in the middle of reading, and I just wanted to tell you that right here:
“Maybe I’ll tell you the story one day,” he growls into Max’s ear, letting his lips brush the lobe. He then shuffles down his victim’s legs and immediately takes to sliding Max’s skinnies down his hips.My heart started pounding against my ribs--FRANTICALLY--and my breath started coming a lot quicker than normal. And I started shifting positions in my computer chair and my eyes started darting a lot more. I only noticed because I hit my knee on my desk when I did it ( ... )

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leadenguide June 3 2010, 07:00:26 UTC
Thank you so much. I know my writing can be gruesome and cruel, and it unfortunately gets worse. I don't want you upset with me, so there's your warning. I am soupie excited to put up new chapters, though.

*Sighs* I don't know how I ever got so graphic.

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