Fic: A Christmas Carol (4/4)

Dec 25, 2011 01:10

Title: A Christmas Carol (4/4)
Fandom/Pairing: X-Men: First Class, Charles/Erik
Genre: Drama/Romance
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,070
Summary: Around Christmas 1962, Erik gets a nightly visit by a strange woman with extraordinary abilities who claims to be the Ghost of Christmas - Past, Present and Future. Despite his objections - after all, such ( Read more... )

x-men: first class, fanfic, cherik, slash fic

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atroppa December 25 2011, 05:11:28 UTC
+100000000000

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leandralocke December 25 2011, 07:52:23 UTC
I'm staring to find it adorable how you guys throw in some big words and state something is wrong/problematic, yet entirely failed to explain how and why, especially after all the questions that I've raised. ("Ok, if this is problematic, how about this and that?" - "ignore ignore. It just IS. You're evol ( ... )

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anonymous December 25 2011, 16:53:01 UTC
You don't mention Erik's being Jewish once in a Christmas-themed story, or Chanukkah, for that matter, and your Tumblr is filled with things like Charles and Erik in Santa hats and acerbic diatribes about how everyone who doesn't 'get' your vision is a politically correct-obsessed whiner. That's all usakeh is pointing out ( ... )

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avictoriangirl December 25 2011, 04:03:55 UTC
Oh, this was just lovely! And I'm looking forward to the sequel! ;)

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leandralocke December 25 2011, 08:23:34 UTC
Aww thank you :)

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telperion_15 December 25 2011, 09:20:21 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Christmas fluff of the highest order!

And am also looking forward to the sequel! :)

Merry Christmas!

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leandralocke December 25 2011, 09:23:08 UTC
Thank you ♥
And merry Christmas to you too.

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leandralocke December 26 2011, 08:52:00 UTC
Wow, thank you for that lovely and detailed comment.

About the explanation: Yes, I admit, it was a bit difficult to write that bit because Erik is just a silent observer, and I didn't want to bring in too many explanations because it wasn't the first time they had been discussing this, and it wouldn't have sounded authentic if they had explained too much. With the help of speak_me_fair I made some additions to stress Erik's confusion and bring across that the topic IS, in fact, not sufficiently explained. That he'd like to ask questions to learn more about it to understand what exactly is going on, and how it's even possible, medically and in detail ( ... )

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ohschmidt December 26 2011, 18:28:14 UTC
You can quit sucking speak_me_fair's balls anytime, now.

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leandralocke December 26 2011, 18:36:54 UTC
I'm not sucking anyone's balls. speak_me_fair and I had a really nice, polite and civilized discussion in which we found common/middle ground and she helped me improve things by explaining herself politely and sufficiently. It was a really great example of constructive criticism, and my reaction to her would have been the same to everyone else if I hadn't been insulted, accused, outright not listened to (you guys do know that there are things like MISunderstandings right? - And a misunderstanding doesn't have to be one party's fault alone but mostly is caused by BOTH poor expression and wrong/preconceived perception).

But why am I even commenting. You people are - excuse me - to daft to understand the basics of a) constructive criticism b) civilized disputes and differences in opinion and, most of all, c) how to fucking treat other human beings. H.Y.P.O.C.R.I.T.E.S!

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clexy_operative January 4 2012, 17:56:30 UTC
aww :D ....sweetest X-Men Christmas Carol ever!!!

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