An amazing, amazing fic. I was utterly gripped by every part of it, and eduardo's characterization was SO SPOT ON. I love how you totally highlighted how he gives in to mark every single time, and his trajectory from being friends with mark through to both their gfs and then getting together was such page-turning writing. Really fantastic job :)
Oh gosh, thank you so, so much! I was hoping that I wasn't making Eduardo over the top and your comment about him being spot on makes me feel so much better about the fic. Thank you. ♥
That was amazing! Mark was an asshole to Eduardo but the ending was just too heart-wrenching. But it was really beautiful. Thanks for posting this wonderful story!
Holy crap, this is just epic and amazing and makes me SO SAD :(:(:( Stupid Wardo, why can't you understand!?!? I love how you took their story back to pre-movie, I thought it all felt very genuine. Mark is just so frustrating, he couldn't ever seem to be able to convey how he really felt about Wardo, and now everything is ruined D: Tell me that mark apologizes and wardo gets over it and the live happily ever after, PLEASE!!!
At times I wanted to hit Eduardo over the head for being so oblivious but I felt like it would make an awesome plot device. But I also wanted to hit Mark for being so passive about everything so it's like I couldn't win. X)
I wish I could tell you that Mark apologizes and there's a happy ending but, well, the world may never know. ;)
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I wish I could tell you that Mark apologizes and there's a happy ending but, well, the world may never know. ;)
Thank you!
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I'm a sappy-lover, so I was a little "I need to be in the right mind set for this" and... bhuaaaa ç______ç
But it's beautiful ♥
*now I'm going in my happy place where they'll find how to make it better*
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Thank you so much for your comment!
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