fic: three's a good number (mark/eduardo)

[learnthemusic]

Title: three's a good number
Pairing: Mark/Eduardo
Rating: PG-13
Summary: There are three very specific things that Eduardo likes about being in a relationship with Mark, things that he never would have envisioned himself tolerating even when he was twenty years old and starving for Mark’s attention. future fic! established relationship!
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[des_pudels_kern]

I love how you show them post-working things out, with their happy ending, but with the past rearing its ugly head. Because no matter how much they say and think they are done with it, it did happen, and it was bad and painful and cut deep enough that they can't help thinking about it with any new doubt and hurt.

[yellowwolf5]

[Take 2. Be nice, LJ]
I love that you filled this prompt. I do like the whole sitting between someone else's legs thing, it's cute and then you turned the prompt into this lovely piece of fiction. ♥ I love it!

[oflights]

ahhh I adore this. you've captured them so well just in these small moments; I absolutely love the second section, because it shows Mark's growth and I think that's essential to their relationship ever working out at all (and really realistic from the end of the movie, to me). and of course the part- it's so perfectly in character, it makes me want to cry. Eduardo honestly seems incapable of ever hurting Mark too badly, taking it too far, which is almost a handicap for him in their fights. and Mark, who means well now but still screws up because he's just always a little left of center in terms of feelings and reactions.

okay, I will shut up now. this is perfect, and I loved it. <3

[yunsi]

This was lovely. It's so nice to see them all grown up, and even when they stumble, they're able to work through it together b/c it's worth fighting for. And Mark sitting between Eduardo's legs is such a cute image.

[nlovers]

i like how you write this and confront the issues head on. it did happend and painful and the scar probably last forever.