QAF Fic: Take What You Want, Leave What You Don't, Brian/Justin

[learnthemusic]

Title: Take What You Want, Leave What You Don’t
Author: learnthemusic
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Brian/Justin

Summary: This wasn’t part of the plan. [S1-S3]

DISCLAIMER: Don’t own the characters. Never have, never will. They belong to CowLip unless otherwise noted.
Author’s Note: This is the first QAF fic I’ve written, so I hope it’s not too big of a failure

Comments

[scoobygang8]

oh, lovely lovely. Pretty darn good for your first fic. It was the last couple lines that got me. Good stuff.
<3 Jules

[learnthemusic]

I really appreciate it. Thanks so much!

[sexy_pumpkin]

Hi, great start, I really liked it, it's pretty daunting isn;t it? I just wrote & posted my 1st fic here on LJ last week, I felt sick lol, but hey people liked it, if not they don;t have to read it.

Good luck with your fic writing, most people want a sequel from me, BUT I have my reservations on that lol,,later Sexy P.x

BTW BK could never resist him, it was his only weakness :)

[learnthemusic]

Yeah, I felt like I was never going to be able to write a QAF fic. But I sat there and the words came out. It was a pretty good feeling too, because lately it's taken a lot of energy to write well.

Thanks!

[sexy_pumpkin]

Hey, yes it flowed out of me to, but I'd had this fic in my heart & head for 3 yrs, it was just putting it all together, & OMG writing the porn really tested me, after all the porn I'd read, nothing prepared me, for writing my own lol.
But most people liked it, I guess BJ porn is hot, who ever writes it,,later Jx

[shadownyc]

That's a lovely first fic. You should definitely continue.

[learnthemusic]

I definitely hope to continue. Thanks!

[kari77]

Wow, this is really, really good. Your writing has a great flow, I just wanted for it to go on and on and on. Marvelous description of what was going on inside Brian up to S3.

My favorite paragraphs:
From there on out, life became an open bar where he just kept taking the shots as they came because no one stopped handing them out and everyone wanted him to take them.

...

Brian sits on the edge of the bed, cigarette hanging limply from his lips, and misses something about the one thing he can’t put his finger on.

Thanks so much for sharing. I'd love to read more from you. :)

[learnthemusic]

I appreciate it so much when people tell what they like specifically. It allows me to build on that particular fic's style and continue it throughout others. Thanks so much for your comment!

[learnthemusic]

I hope to see more from me, too. :D

Thanks so much!