Fic: "Your Vigil"

[leave_me_light]

 

Comments

[momm2five]

Oh! *sigh*
Beautiful introspective. I really like the thoughts and emotions. You've nailed both of them!

[leave_me_light]

Thanks. It's good to know that it wasn't too rambling or confusing. I wanted to convey the possibility of one being a fully functioning adult, a bit jaded by time, and still somewhat confused about one's place in life. I hope I managed to do that...

[wanderingsmith]

so good to hear John's voice again through you :D.
the sad, the resigned and the simple pleasure in small things. lovely scene

[leave_me_light]

Hey, I'm not the only one here who has strayed, am I? :)

I know I have moments when I feel too old and too young all at the same time. I think John might have these moments too, even if he is somewhat older than I am...

[wanderingsmith]

nope, you're not, I know :)

ummhumm. not up to the task, for whatever excuse we chose to assign it

[chiarahhue]

You glance at her lips and eyelashes, take in your own hand tangled in her soft hair and realize that you have really made your decision a long time ago.

Wonderful job! Love this insight into John's thoughts and feelings from his own POV.

Thanks for writing this - you really made my day! I've missed your Sparky fics!

[leave_me_light]

Thanks. I've missed my Sparky fics a bit, as well :)

I also miss other people's Sparky fics...

[justhere1971]

It's been a while since I've read a sparky fic. Thank you for sharing the quiet, soulful, introspective side of John Sheppard that has been neglected in the series.

[leave_me_light]

Well, I'm glad you chose to read this one, then :)

[rushingwind]

Oh, I love this. So beautiful. :)