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[leecherous]

Title: Stray Kitten
Author: Nihilism
Rating: Adult.
Summary: A sixteen year old homeless kid has his first sexual encounter with an older man. Part one of the Warehouse Series I'll be sporadically putting into text form.
Notes: All characters depicted are original. Little Lee belongs solely to the author, and reproduction will be met with a swift

Comments

omfg thaticon.

[revenant_oozi]

Hearts stars and horseshoes. Seriously, princess is spoiled rotten and she loves it way much <3

i was pretty fond of it.

[leecherous]

I'll start working on the nextish one soon. It's just so long, it's daunting, with Leech and his stalker-rambling and gawd. But worth it, obviously.

[billievsfink]

D'aww. Little Leech is just too adorable in any situation.

But you should've slept! Now you're going to be all tired for work tomorrow!

[leecherous]

I guess I have to agree with you, there. He's pretty damn cute.

I couldn't! I'll just...eh...sleep at work or something.

[payphoneboy]

Ahahahaha. I love how Leech just 'snaps' and makes a dive for Ruckus' cock. He's hella fucking cute, but you knew that. I think you successfully managed to portray a sixteen year old's confusion about everything, sex especially, and still have Leech not be an emo fuck about it. I also really enjoyed the descriptions of their eyes, all over the story, the word combinations were perfect. yaywriting!

[leecherous]

Cock radar took over, Idunno. Thank you! I dunno what my thing is with eyes lately, I want to describe them in every fucking sentence. Again, Idunno.

[mikeyface]

OH MY GOD!!! How is it possible that I've never seen your writing before? Well, maybe since I joined only in November? Wow. I'm seriously speechless which, for ME is saying a lot. You are a FANTASTIC writer!! *is jealous* Your writing is so visual and descriptive and just ... tangible? It sucked me right in, that's for sure!! Wow. I'm off to read more! ^_^

[leecherous]

Oh, I'm sure you've read something I've written. I'm all over every damn slash archive out there. 9_9 I just noticed you commented on every part - thank you! If you want to read some more, the actual fanfic stuff, just click here. That's where I have everything NOT on the LJ archived. :)

[mikeyface]

Oooh! Thank you! I already went to the site so I could bookmark it and I had to read (it jumped out at me!) the fic you did about Billie/Mike and their fetishes. That was SO awesome! (BILLIE IN A DRESS! EEEE!) I printed that one out for my personal collection :D But anyway, thank you for the link and yes! I commented on all parts because such great work deserves great comments! ^_^

[xrubysohox]

I think, for me, the most intense part of this story was that first sentence, the It really wasn't supposed to happen this way.. I'm not too sure why, exactly, but it's kinda haunting, in a way. I couldn't stop thinking about it as the story went on- especially with how fractured Ruckus seems. It's like, there's almost a tinge of regret, or maybe fear, but it's mostly overlooked because of either character's actions. I've just now realized how bad I am at reviewing. Sweet.

Oh, and bullshit that you can't write things without dialogue. What, two lines in this one? You know I love it.

[leecherous]

Pfft, I missed this review in my earlier commenting spreeeee. I'm glad the first sentence hit you that way, good way to catch a reader's interest and all. There's definitely something fractured in Ruckus, maybe both of those (since he isn't really mine, I can't say for sure) but I think he plays it down as much as he can, and Leech is too scared to bring it up, mostly. You do not suck at reviews, shuttup. You're awesome. Thank youuu!

Haha, thanks. One of the few dialogue-less things that doesn't suck balls that I've written, maybe? If there even is another one.