so maybe you were right...

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Title: Duster Knows
Author: Nihilism
Rating: Dark themes, suggested gheyness, drug abuse, whores, not-death.
Summary: So there it lies, the whole mistake, your satisfied smile tells me it's not all right. Duster ponders over whether he's really got Ruckus' best interests in mind.
And also: A snippet based on a different roleplay, I suppose I should

Comments

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I really, really, really adore this. I like the '....hour(s) later" bit beause I'm a sucker for repetition. It really holds things together, and ties it together so it's complete, unified. Does that make sense?

You have this way of making things so brutally honest, so dark and dank and eerie that the reader has no other option than accept the fact that that's the way things are. It's very convincing, like the reader just wants to reach out and help, almost like they're involved enough by simply reading it, making them believe that there's something they can do to fix the characters.

I doubt I'm making much sense, but I love this. So harsh.

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No, no, you make sense, except for the part where you praise me so much. I really appreciate the review, though, since apparently no one else reads this crap. Repetition is one of my favorite tools, maybe overused sometimes, but it definitely does draw the story together and all that. Mmmanyway, thank you thank you thank you. You are excellent.