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[leecherous]

Title: Smell
Author: Nihilism
Notes: This is the first drabble I've ever written. I think it's more of a ramble. But anyway, it was inspired and therefore FOR Jackie. I might make it longer and more literate when I feel the urge. For now, you can figure out what the pairing is.

Comments

[payphoneboy]

I like that it begins and ends pretty much the same way, with the change in the end showing time passssed instead of bringing you back to the beginning once more. And Mike's right, the lack of using the space bar is really effective in getting the sense of urgency and need across. I also like how you described them instead of using their names, though "etched dancing skeleton with a martini glass in one hand and manic grin" seems over-descriptive and run-on-like in comparison to the rest of the.. drabble. However, I know you wrote it just to make it easier to guess who Tim's fucking.

I'm glad you're writing mooooooore.

[the__hollow]

*has seen your website and is stalking.. shh*

*grin*

Very nice. Hot hot hot.

[leecherous]

O_O Sneaky! I'm glad you like it. Look, I'm trendy with my Davey icon. Woo!

[the__hollow]

rawr davey!!

[rilee16]

And you prove me right once again. Sofuckinggood.

[revenant_oozi]

Oh god that was beautiful. Visualization. Sensory details. Still trying to figure out who would have the Social Distortion logo... maybe I'm just an idiot.

[leecherous]

Hmm...maybe someone who loves his own band a whole, whole lot? ;) Thanks!

[revenant_oozi]

Oh I know this is totally off topic and sorta rude, but um, could you possibly reccomend a Pistol Grip CD to me? I've been meaning to check them out for a long time, and I finally have the funding. Sorry if this is totally the wrong place to ask this!

[revenant_oozi]

And also, my guess as to Mr. Tim's ravisher is Matt, since I'm pretty sure he's still Social D's bassist now...