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[leecherous]

Title: The Black Hole
Author: Nihilism
Disclaimer: Don't know, don't own, not insinuating.
Comments: Just something I let flow out of me. A little memory-type thing. Nothing spectacular. Based on some stuff I've heard about Mr. Ness.

Comments

[revenant_oozi]

Oh I needed something like this right now. Nothing fluffy or flowery. I loved it. Is there more?

[leecherous]

Most likely not more, as in, picking up right where this left off. But I'm into writing "memories" for a roleplay community I'm in. So there will probably be some more Michel memories on the way sooner or later. Thanks for the review!

[dustbinflower]

This, Jay, is brilliant. God. This is really fucking brilliant. Seriously. In such a little scene you created so much, so much emotion, personality, background. I am truly amazed. I hope that you'll never stop writing, because you'll only get better and better and right now I can't even imagine what better than this would be.

The freedom of flying through the air, carefree, only to meet a sudden stop, still shivering with energy. Michael sometimes feels the same way.

So good, that line. So true. Captures so much in so few words.

I really love this and I truly hope it won't go long before I see something new from you.

Disco Sucks Fuck Everything came on as I wrote this. It has to mean something, although I'm not sure what.

I love you lots, and I really really love this.

much love and respect, Mike

[leecherous]

It's the CONNECTION. Ohmygoodlord.

Your reviews are always the best evah. I'm glad you enjoyed this, even though there was no real plot or anything to it. That line, the one you italisized, I wasn't too sure about. It seemed a bit disjointed and superfluous to me, but you have reassured me, so thank you for that. And thank you for this review!

Tons of love and respect,
Jay

P.S. Don't worry...I'm writing now. Not much of it will be any longer than this, but I AM writing.

[looking_spiffy]

Again with the atmosphere. And the emotional description...whee. I love it how you don't go into huge details about Michael's condition, but it's enough for you to draw your own fearful conclusions. And I'd love to be pissed enough to try and wreck a wall with a switchblade, just once...the whole thought of bleeding like that might put me off though. Not that I'm trying to trivialise it or anything. *smacks self*
SD ain't my fandom, but fucking A all the same.

[leecherous]

I kind of wanted it to be vague, the whole thing, just hinting...like looking back through a photo album or something. Just a flash of memory. So I'm glad that came across all right. And trust me - being pissed off enough to attack a wall isn't all it's cracked up to be. Haha. And HOW CAN YOU NOT LOVE SOCIAL D? Look, look how adorable he was back then:

[looking_spiffy]

ohlookathisprettyFACE. Awww muchly.
And it's not really a casew of not liking Social D, it's just that I haven't heard enough of their music to make a judgement...I must say I'm a lot more interested now I've seen what the boy looks like. Rowr.

[leecherous]

Oh, my. If you had an instant messenger of any sort I could send you so many Social D songs you'd be up to your eyeballs in the loving of them. They're really a fantastic band, so fantastic that I actually have trouble writing slash including Mike because it's like...blaspheming a God. But I'm sure I'll get over that. I adore them so much I have a song title tattooed on my wrist. You must, somehow, hear them. Lots of them. And for good measure.

Mike, 1982

[day_glo_mohawk]

Ooh. I enjoyed this quite a bit. I think you're the only person able to put that much emotion and background into such a short piece of writing.
And in the course of your reviews you've ended up posting pictures of Mike. Which makes things that much better.
I agree with you, he is a god, and I think you're one of the few (if not the only) person able to slash him and not sound like an ass and make me want to smack you.
Okay, that's enough.
Theend.