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[leecherous]

Title: You Have Loved Enough
Author: Nihilism
Rating: Mildish
Summary: I am not the one who loves - it's the love that seizes me. Tim reminisces bitterly in a hotel room on December 25th, 2003.
Notes: Mentions of slash (Tim/Jesse, Tim/Mike Ness) but no real pairing. Written quickly while tired, and uneditted, so the quality may suck. Hell, the

Comments

[revenant_oozi]

aiiiiiiiiiie thats the best thing I've read in months! I want to smother you with love and grattitude right now, but I'll restrain myself for the time being!!

[tellingthem]

Ignore how I'm on the wrong journal name...

I write something at ass AM when I can hardly think straight and it's the best thing you've read in months? I'm flattered, and ALSO very disappointed in other writers for letting you down so much. The love and gratitude are appreciated, at whichever time you choose to smother me with them.

Matt + Tim = BFF, to be cheesy, and that's all there is to it. Thanks a ton for sticking with me and liking my writing even though I neverever do it anymore.

[griffinmaxwell]

awwwww!!!!!! :melts:

[leecherous]

Ehehe. I'll take that as a good sign. -solidifies-

[blackksails]

Ace. Fucking ace, man.

The diversity, the way you separate reality from fiction but still manage to get under everyone's skin. The way you say everything that everyone is thinking internally but not willing enough to say it verbally.

Love the 'Merry Christmas' repetition; good literary technique and, more importantly, it leaves a more lasting impression upon the reader. Everything is real in it, however fake it may actually be-- if that makes sense. There's no logical fallacies in it- it's simply your Ethos, Pathos and Logos being displayed in writing.

Mother fucking ace.

Ace of Spades?

[leecherous]

I have no idea what Ethos, Pathos and Logos means so I feel stupid now, but I also feel very happy that you enjoyed the ass-AM-almost-dead-tired writing.

Re: Ace of Spades?

[blackksails]

They're all appeals that are given off by the writer and given to the reader in a piece of writing. Ethos- ethical appeal, Pathos- emotional appeal, and Logos- logical appeal. Don't feel stupid, I'm just a dork.

Re: Ace of Spades?

[leecherous]

You're not a dork, that rocks. I feel all intelligent now.

[the__hollow]

Aw that was so awesome. I love the way you wrote his memories and just everything about it. Poor Timmy all alone.

[leecherous]

:( I weep for him. No Timmys should be alone on Christmas.

But thank you for the comment! :)

[looking_spiffy]

Aww. It starts off all sad and then gets all warm and fluffy. Matty saves the day. I love the little tiny vignettes and their similarities. This line would be my favourite:-

It's just him, Tim, Lint, whatever fucking name he feels like hiding behind this year,

And the image of Mr. Jesse warbling 'Jingle Bells' is gonna stay with me for a longlong time. FUNNY. Yay! <3 (apologies for taking so goddamn long to review this...ack.)

[tellingthem]

Ehehehe. No worries, dude, reviews are fab whenever they're given. Jesse and his Jingle Bells are my favorite part, personally. But that could just be because IloveJesseMichaels. Thankyou!