Hahahahahaohmygod! They're so perfect! Little Jesse-bunny with his hat on backwards and awwwwwww...I'm reminded of Bambi, but I suppose that's the point, isn't it? Awwwww.
And yes, of course it's abrupt...because I imagine it was in real life, no?
~~~WHY DON'T YOU WRITE ANYTHING LONG ANYMORE? GAWD LIKE SERIOUSLY, THIS IS SO SHORT WHAT THE FUCK?!?! I NEED MY SHITTY ASS POWER-PUNK-POP MUSIC NOW! WAHHH!
Haha.
So okay. Review. I loved this. I love repetition, the "day" thing was so dead on, it was subtle yet noticeable and everything in between. And just the descriptions, with Lint hearing things from Jesse that he never would have expected-- it makes Lint seem so much younger than Jesse. Which, literally he may not be but mentally, probably. The point is, I loved it, and the length of a story does not describe the importance and or quality of it. And also, this review is shit because certain trail mixes are fun. You're so far past a good writer, it's rad. <333333333
Repition is something that I seem to be addicted to, really, especially with these drabbles and shit. It just draws it together better. I think that Lint is definitely less MENTALLY MATURE than Jesse was, at that point anyway, but that could be because of certain people I know who remind me of Lint. Trailmix4lyyyyyfe. <333
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Here's something to make sadJesse manic again:
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And yes, of course it's abrupt...because I imagine it was in real life, no?
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Anyways. So reviewing. Ahem.
~~~WHY DON'T YOU WRITE ANYTHING LONG ANYMORE? GAWD LIKE SERIOUSLY, THIS IS SO SHORT WHAT THE FUCK?!?! I NEED MY SHITTY ASS POWER-PUNK-POP MUSIC NOW! WAHHH!
Haha.
So okay. Review. I loved this. I love repetition, the "day" thing was so dead on, it was subtle yet noticeable and everything in between. And just the descriptions, with Lint hearing things from Jesse that he never would have expected-- it makes Lint seem so much younger than Jesse. Which, literally he may not be but mentally, probably. The point is, I loved it, and the length of a story does not describe the importance and or quality of it. And also, this review is shit because certain trail mixes are fun. You're so far past a good writer, it's rad. <333333333
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SoSad. SoTrue.
Eeeeee! IckleBambiLint. And even IcklerBunnyJesse.
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Iknowthey'reprecious!
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