So, okay. You like, own writing or something, right? Right.
You have this weird, complex way of describing things simply, but it has this little lasting effect. Like this:
But when they were in bed, both with sheets sticking to their skin and panting for breath
It was just so good. Like, mental images and depth of perception and emotion and yeah. I dunno, maybe I look too far into things, but this was really good. Really. Good.
~~~~~~You're like, too good to me and shit. This was written in no more than 20 minutes and not a lot of effort. And yet you make me feel like it's more important than the declaration of independence. CRAZY SHIT. Thank you!~~~~~~~~~~
TOOCUTE. I am being cute-ed to death right now. The 'love threatening to break open his ribcage' - mildly violent/masochistic, but perfect description.
Horribly cute. Bleh. At least I can now write angstysad shit again because Sommer says I've "proved myself capable of writing happy things" or something. Thankyou!
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So, okay. You like, own writing or something, right? Right.
You have this weird, complex way of describing things simply, but it has this little lasting effect. Like this:
But when they were in bed, both with sheets sticking to their skin and panting for breath
It was just so good. Like, mental images and depth of perception and emotion and yeah. I dunno, maybe I look too far into things, but this was really good. Really. Good.
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The 'love threatening to break open his ribcage' - mildly violent/masochistic, but perfect description.
*purrs*
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OHMYGOD JAYME YOU WROTE SOMETHING HAPPY
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