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Aug 04, 2005 22:58

I wrote this for a roleplay during work today, meant to be a journal update. But it just kept rambling. It's first person, original characters, so there's no disclaimer except my apologies to Mr. Tarantino.

Title: It Rained Today
Author: Nihilism
Summary: An eighteen year old Leech gets verbose about the rain and his new roommate.

It rained today. )

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xshotgunsinnerx August 5 2005, 05:02:28 UTC
Well, you already know I like this. Yes.

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revenant_oozi August 5 2005, 05:16:48 UTC
I concur. Leechal Distortion is love.

WOW add to the list again.

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payphoneboy August 5 2005, 06:13:32 UTC
Yaaaay, notebook. Yaaaaay, writing. Yaaaay, Leech. I still like it, and it's reoccuring theme.

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blackksails August 5 2005, 20:27:09 UTC
Love it.

Usually, I dislike first person [hypocritical, yes, I know], because sometimes it seems too...forced, too one-sided, ya know? But you comepletely dodge that.

There was no movement, only the noise the rain that still sporadically splattering against the open window pane made. I was at war with myself then, my limbs warm and heavy and tingling where they came into contact with his soft skin, as my mind whirred away busily with it's unfounded paranoia and worst-case scenarios.

Golden. Keep it up.

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missalexia January 1 2006, 03:01:47 UTC
Oh geez. That was amazing. As always.

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