I wrote this for a roleplay during work today, meant to be a journal update. But it just kept rambling. It's first person, original characters, so there's no disclaimer except my apologies to Mr. Tarantino.
Title: It Rained Today
Author: Nihilism
Summary: An eighteen year old Leech gets verbose about the rain and his new roommate.
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It rained today. )
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WOW add to the list again.
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Usually, I dislike first person [hypocritical, yes, I know], because sometimes it seems too...forced, too one-sided, ya know? But you comepletely dodge that.
There was no movement, only the noise the rain that still sporadically splattering against the open window pane made. I was at war with myself then, my limbs warm and heavy and tingling where they came into contact with his soft skin, as my mind whirred away busily with it's unfounded paranoia and worst-case scenarios.
Golden. Keep it up.
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