Bath Time, a little Snarry fic

Aug 07, 2008 13:25

I wrote a small fic. Harry is very young in his memory, so you can call this chan, but not really since nothing sexual happens ( Read more... )

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amruniel August 7 2008, 18:53:50 UTC
I really love this little story.
The young Harry is simply perfect. One can imagine him in all his innocent, without losing the view of the man he will ultimately become.

I particularly loved Snape and his reaction to the little intruder. Most of all:
Had the man not been enjoying his light buzz, he might have commented on the rudeness of little boys. "I'm here to make sure the boogie man doesn't get you," he said under his breath, finding the truth ironic in the extreme.

I'd have loved the story to be longer, but it's absolutely stunning the way it is!

Cheers
-Am-

PS: I'm going to rec this fic in my LJ, which is hopefully okay. If not, just let me know. :)

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leelee_potter August 7 2008, 22:08:09 UTC
Thanks for the rec!

This is such a small story that I feel like 'now what?'. Thanks for the review. :)

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amruniel August 7 2008, 22:10:39 UTC
It's a small story, but it's in itself perfect :)

I hope to read more of your wonderful fics soon (and I hope to finally find the time to catch up on "Death Eater takes A Holiday", which I sadly stopped reading ages ago) :D

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amythest_n_ice August 7 2008, 22:42:42 UTC
Oh, this is nice, lol. I especially liked the last few lines, the attitudes were so them.

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hambares August 10 2008, 18:12:39 UTC
Harry has all the luck. Things did play out well!

It was great to see something new! Keep 'em coming! You must feel so light having DETaH all finished!

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Thanks Heidi leelee_potter August 11 2008, 12:18:34 UTC
Yeah, I do feel light...or more like lost. lol Now what? Glad you liked the little snarry. It's so short compared to the DETaH chapter that I felt funny posting it. :)

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barnicole August 28 2008, 22:47:57 UTC
I always love bath time!

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DETAH Question anonymous October 20 2008, 19:10:22 UTC
Hi. This is actually a DETAH Question. I am currently re-reading it (again) and I'm in the Meet Joe Black chapter. My question is, the black bird that delivered the note 'warning' of Harry's impending kidnapping by his trainers, was that bird Severus?

Maven

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Re: DETAH Question leelee_potter November 8 2008, 06:32:52 UTC
Yes, the bird was our dear Sev. :)

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