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leen1707

Do Electric Girls Dream about Android Boys (1/4?)

Feb 15, 2012 05:32

Title: Do Electric Girls Dream about Android Boys (1/4?)
Pairing: Kame/robot-girl of the "Lock On" PV - eventually
Word Count:1,550
Genre: Oh.. Uh.. Sci-fi meet KAT-TUN-gen crack meet a little fluff meet a lot of generic sci-fi angst? Ehm... do I need to tell that it's AU?
Disclaimer: Pure fiction. Any real persons/events mentioned deserve my sincere ( Read more... )

kat-tun, fanfiction, kame

Comments 2

ladyc2 February 16 2012, 00:49:33 UTC

Definitely keep writing :)

I like the idea of them being humans upgraded into androids (although the way I've phrased that makes me think of Cybermen from Dr Who - even though they aren't like that at all) presumably to be better able to complete whatever mission they've been sent on. Sad that it messes with their memories though (by accident or on purpose????), although from the sounds of it they were all running away from something anyway.

And building the robot girl as a way to cheer Kame up is great, especially since it worked.

Spotted a typo though - Koki kicks triumphantly at Maru's sheen, should be shin. Hope you don't mind me pointing that out :)

I'll look forward to the rest :D Thank you for writing.

leen1707 February 17 2012, 16:28:11 UTC

I'm glad you like it :) Lol at Dr. Who reference, no they are not like this. Actually, frankly, the androids bit is not very important to the story, it's just that it was one of the pushes that made me start thinking along this line, so it made it in. Also, it's sort of makes them closer to the robot-girl in that they are not completely human either ( ... )