Do Electric Girls Dream about Android Boys (3/4?)

[leen1707]

Title: Do Electric Girls Dream about Android Boys (3/4?)
Pairing: Kame/robot-girl of the "Lock On" PV - eventually
Word Count:1,700
Genre: AU, angst
Disclaimer: Pure fiction. Any real persons/events mentioned deserve my sincere apologies for being subjected to my voluntary artistic interpretation.

A/N: A little more of the boys in this chapter, Kame and

Comments

[ladyc2]

This is the chapter that really evoked a sense of the PV in me. With them all going to visit her individually (don't suppose she's been observing any group dance routines though Lol! ) and using her as a confession box - or just talking to her in Kame's case. And of course she likes his visits best - they've made her a very smart girl :D

And Maru. I loved Maru and his "mood". Snapping at Junno, wondering if the whole point of what there doing will be obsolete when they make it back and that everything they are doing will be a complete waste of time.

[leen1707]

This is the chapter that really evoked a sense of the PV in me.
I'm really, really glad that it did, it was something that sort of gave me the whole idea for this story - them talking to this silent "girl in a tube".

With Kame - I hope I managed to convey how his "lessons" are different from the others, and how he really puts thought into doing them for her: both in speaking about nice things, and also - sensations, smth. that can't be learnt - only experienced. (unlike the others who slip into talking about themselves, he is aware of her all the time) And also he is Kame, so he is also just plain cute doing so :P

And Maru, yeah. What he told were the words I longed to write since the beginning of the story. And "moods" are back...

[omnomthing]

This was wonderfully written and I can't wait to read the rest. :)It certainly made me re-evaluate how I see the PV. Very interesting and keep it up. <3