Like Ships at Sea... (5/5)

[leen1707]

Title: Like Ships at Sea... (5/5)

Pairing: Akame

Word count: ~35000

Rating: NC-17

Genre/Warnings: AU, angst, fluff, smut (and everything in between).

Disclaimer: This story is a product of my imagination. Any parallels with real persons or events are pure coincidence.

Notes:Initially written for

Comments

[cutebambi]

I see your post on a community, I read the summary of your fic, and feel very interesting. So I come here & ask for your permission to add friend with you. May I, dear?

[leen1707]

Sure you can! I'm glad to have new friends and readers. This is a fic-journal mostly, and be prepaired that I actually am a slow writer (when not time-pressed by an exchange assignment, lol)

[ryufurizawa]

i sooo love it!!!:) more... please???*_*

[leen1707]

I'm glad you like it! As to "more... please??" - this story is to the end, but I keep getting plot-bunnies related to this versee, so maybe there will be a few shorter stories/drabbles later on.

[ryufurizawa]

what i mean is more fics to come.:) i really love how you write... nice flow, captivating not confusing. keep it up!!!(^_^)

[leen1707]

Oh, there will be)) The only thing I really need is time)

[edogawa]

This story is beautiful ^_^

Very well written, funny, sweet and hot.

I liked these two since the first encounter, but as the story went on, I really started to love them.

I read all the chapters in one go, starting from some hours ago, and I apologies if I'm commenting only on the last one. All the chapters have been full of inspirations, and I found myself nodding to a lot of sentences you wrote.

Thank you very much!

I should have known that the story was good, as you wrote you originally created it for Green Feelings and she's one of my favourite authors ^_^

Thank you again ^^

[leen1707]

Thank you very much!

I read all the chapters in one go, starting from some hours ago, and I apologies if I'm commenting only on the last one. All the chapters have been full of inspirations, and I found myself nodding to a lot of sentences you wrote.
This is a real compliment, you know, because I do it myself - if I like the story very much, I'll read it in one go, unless RL intervenes most drastically, of course. I wish you would mention at least one of such places you were "nodding to", because I know what were the key phrases/scenes for myself when I wrote it, but it's always interesting to know what got to your readers)) *begs unashamedly XD*

I should have known that the story was good, as you wrote you originally created it for Green Feelings
Yes, she is amazing, isn't she?

[edogawa]

Hi dear ^^

I hope you don't mind but I wrote some feelings I had reading your story and I'll post a comment for every chapter.

Comment for 5th chapter will follow this one.

If this is too troublesome, gomen!

<3

[edogawa]

This chapter started with one of the best sex scene I have ever read. Really. It was different unconventional.

Deep and intriguing the motivation why Jin didn’t want to touch Kame in the “usual” places. And Kame is able to trust him and for a while he can give the control to Jin, even if he’s continuously complaining, asking Jin to “just fuck him already”.

And then Jin decide to switch their roles and it’s so sexy. Kame looking while Jin is preparing, Kame biting his lips to the point they almost bleed, Kame takes the control back.. “beautiful beautiful beautiful”, as you wrote.

After that the Titanic moment.. I was scared, because I really can empathize with them.. as I was able to during the vision of Titanic. I don’t know why.. perhaps the deep sea really scares me.

They were courageous, really. I was proud of them :)!
And the end is so sweet, so sweet with a promise for the future. It’s like they finally were able to grab their dream. I can imagine their lives from that moment on..

Soooooo..

m(_ _)m Arigatou
<3<3<3

[amm_akame_love]

wow!
it was sooo amazing! and lovely! and wow! XD
really, I loved it too much XD
the irony of all, watching the Titanic and that's what happens XD
anyway, it was amazing how everything went, how they got to know each other, how they fell in love with each other. The future seems right and bright~
thanks for sharing!

[leen1707]

Glad you liked it!

Oh yeah, "Titanic" actually ninja-ed its way in, something like - I thought "They do not leave the cabin this day, so what do they do? Maybe watch a movie on Jin's laptop?" And then I saw it mentioned somewhere that Kame likes the Titanic, and it was just - bingo! so appropriate XD

I really wanted to make their relationship, trust and love build gradually and realistically, especially with how initially scarred/reserved Kame was, and Jin too was looking more for a fun companion rather than for a "love of his life"))

As to the future - there is still a lot of difficult logistic for their love - what with Jin living in London and Kame in Japan, and them both having something that holds them to those places - which is part of why I ended it at this particular point, but well - we can hope they manage it finally?

[leen1707]

Thank you for reading and commenting, and I'm very glad that you liked it! Especially, that you liked the ending, since it is sort of "in the air" - a moment of peace, fleeting like all the perfect moments)) And yeah, inebriated (or just hyper) Kame is always cute (and lame :P )