Lingering

Sep 22, 2005 02:30

Fate lies before me ( Read more... )

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bdyffrent September 22 2005, 14:10:39 UTC
I cannot escape the water,
My actions speak the truth,
What waves do I stir,
In troubles, sunk my tooth.

Fantastical!

Love it.

MUAH!

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Provocotive anonymous September 26 2005, 10:09:04 UTC
Confusion, Resolution, Fear, Uncertainty, Regret, Trapped. What could possibly have happened to make you so torn up? Talk to me whenvery you feel the need, im always, ALWAYS here for you, whether it seems like it or not. In terms of poetic skill I'll say this: I generally dont like poems, but the raw emotion and sincere feelings that come through make your poems a pleasure to read, and your writing style flows with amazing grace (please excuse the cliche, hehe)

with true love:
you know who

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