Tavendore (6/?)

[leesangmin]

Title: Tavendore (6/?)
Pairing: WooGyu, MyungYeol, YaDong (all in later chapters)
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Light cursing
Summary: Sungyeol and Woohyun are forced to spend the summer with their grandfather while their parents go on vacation in Europe .The boys find out that the estate on which their grandfather lives is the gateway

Comments

[splashie_xyt]

*A* Loving this so much.

Woohyun is so, perfect here, cheeky and such a normal kid. ^^ It's great. =D

(ah...the whole SOPA PIPA thing...you can still write...just maybe...not be able to post? ^^")

[chocolate_ai]

Sunggyu doesn’t remember exactly how he is left alone with Changmin, his mind is fuzzy and feels like the word is spinning. It seems like a blur, a rush of talking that he can’t remember and Yoochun giving me a tight hug and then pulling Myungsoo out of the throne room to prepare to the rest of the journey.
Reread this paragraph and you'll spot the mistakes ;)

“Oh, that’s fine Minnie! We get to spend more time with Gyu-ah and Myungsoo!”
Wrong usage of the "ah" after the name.. it's only supposed to be used when you're calling someone or talking to that someone. example: “Oh, that’s fine Minnie-ah! We get to spend more time with Gyu and Myungsoo!”

naughty Woohyun!!! XDD i really want to know who those two are!! O____O

[dapdaphaex]

omg this is so awesome :3 i havnt read this kinda fantasy stuff in so long, its refreshing! This is so interesting xD i cant get over it! heh~ Its funny, woohyun's character i mean. Same as sungyeol. Both little conniving boys. AND LMAO YOOCHUN just makes me lol so badly.