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May 08, 2005 14:29


Happy Mother's Day, everyone.

Today is the due date for the 2005 Ron Ficathon.  So here I am again with some weird slash.  Enjoy.

Title:  Kawa no Zubon wo Haita Otoko

Written for: hildigunnur

Rating:  R

Pairing: Draco/Ron

A/N: hildigunnur made this request:  The boys inadvertently wander into a sex shop. (hint: There are quite many of them on Charing Cross Road where ( Read more... )

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thetreacletart May 9 2005, 18:41:59 UTC
Very nice.

I love this pairing and I like what you did with them. I love seeing them niggle each other, with this great underlying tension in every word.

“Remember what you said to me last time, Freckles? You'd seen bigger? I’m here to put my mouth where your money is.”

bwahahaha!!! Great line.

Nicely done.

Oh, did you see this - http://www.livejournal.com/community/quibbler_report/3597.html

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leftsockarchive May 9 2005, 19:26:09 UTC
Thanks for the review; glad you liked.

Cool... I hadn't been aware of that comm previously. :)

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netbyrd May 9 2005, 18:43:57 UTC
I probably shouldn't have read this when mine isn't finished yet, but it's hard to resist the lure of Ron/Draco. I really liked how harsh and gritty your wording is in this. For some reason, I immagined this as a dark film with subtitles. Luna sort of creeped me out too, and I loved the interaction between Ron and Draco. Nice Job.

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leftsockarchive May 9 2005, 19:28:49 UTC
Thanks for the nice review! I've always wanted to take a stab at this pairing, so now I can tuck that under my belt.

Get crackin'. ;)

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clwshorty01 May 9 2005, 23:21:03 UTC
I'm not a R/D shipper by any means, but I liked this one immensely. The atmosphere was kind of creepy and exotic at the same time. I also like Ron's reaction to the whole situation; it's so different from most (of the very few) R/D I've read, where it's all "I've-loved-you-from-afar-for-so-long" and all that jazz. Great job!

Cathy

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leftsockarchive May 10 2005, 07:32:19 UTC
I don't particularly sail this ship either, but I really enjoy the possibilities for it. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it. :)

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shaychana May 10 2005, 08:27:53 UTC
oh my goodness. that was... spectacular. there's something very unique about your fic. the way you phrase your sentences, it's at once hazily schizophrenic and bitingly vicious. your style is so refreshingly different. i can't get enough of it.

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leftsockarchive May 10 2005, 09:50:08 UTC
Wow, this is one of the nicest reviews I've ever received. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had my doubts but I guess it worked in the end.

If you would like to read more of my slash, check out my memories. If you'd like to read my het, check out Hand Me My Robes.

Cheers. :)

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snoopypez May 12 2005, 00:39:46 UTC
Wow. That was dreamy and sexy and relaxing, oddly enough. :D Utterly wonderful.

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leftsockarchive May 12 2005, 09:21:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Thanks for organizing the ficathon!

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