Push - Chapter Two

[leftygirl02]

Title: Push

Fandom: Camp Rock

Genre: Alternate Universe Drama / Literary Fiction

Rating: PG-13, maybe higher (for language, implied violence and intense/possibly scary situations)

Information: Most performers can't fathom not performing, no matter what demons may stand in their way. Sometimes they just need a little push.

CHAPTER ONE: http://leftygirl02

Comments

[lovewrite]

Still waiting to like Shane. Maybe it's a hopeless cause. He just seems incurably insensitive and obnoxious. Maybe I'm wrong? On the flip side, I adore Jason's sweetness and really feel for Nate. Poor guy.

The diva and the future producer were interesting... wonder what the bad blood is there? Jake and Michie are so cute. The question about their names is precisely one I wondered myself! lol

[leftygirl02]

Ah yes, Shane the Never-Ending-Jerk. He is something else. I adore both Jason and Nate for different reasons; Jason just makes me smile while I just want to hug Nate.

Figured the name thing would throw off people; Jake actually isn't in the film. I actually know a girl who goes by Jake here at school. I had read somewhere about Michie's name. And yes, Caitlyn v Tess... dun dun dun!

[pricelessone]

Ooh, I recognized the last line! Hope we start getting some clues to Nate's behavior soon.

Also, just a little thing from here: “A simple ‘no’ would have serviced,”

I think you want sufficed instead of serviced?

[leftygirl02]

First, thank you for catching that. My spelling check wasn't working yesterday, so I didn't see that one. :)

Oh yes; I'd forgotten about telling you that last line. And yes, do need to incorperate some back-story into the scheme of things. Next chapter, next chapter...