Push - Chapter Ten

[leftygirl02]

Title: Push
Fandom: Camp Rock
Genre: Alternate Universe Drama/Literary Fiction
Rating: PG-13, maybe higher (for language, implied violence, and intense/ possibly scary situations)
Information: Most musicians can’t fathom not performing, no matter what demons may stand in their way. Sometimes they just need a little push.

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Comments

[snoopingmother]

I like it! And happy that you have found time to add more -- still looking forward to the rest

[leftygirl02]

Oh no, you're by all means fine. I'm afraid that I had been fiddling around with this way too much, so had a feeling something would be off about it or end up repeated/ done again due to my copying and pasting. Thank you for pointing it out; will attempt to fix as soon as possible. :)

[leftygirl02]

And... fixed! Thank you again. I totally just forgot to cut that paragraph from that portion and fix those silly little errors.

(PS: That song is one we always seem to sing in chapel here. Lately it has come into my head just about every morning while I'm walking to work.)

[lovewrite]

I think I will probably need to reread this because I have no idea what Shane was doing outside the cafeteria when Mitchie and Jake arrived, lol. I know he was sleeping, but... sleeping outside?

Ohhh, I think I get it now - he was sleeping outside because Nate's snoring has been bothering him? So he only just found out that Nate left. I was expecting him to be stopped somehow. Interesting. You're messing with all my preconceived notions. lol

Aaaack, the moment I've been dreading, when Mitchie's lie about her mom would come out. This isn't going to be pretty, definitely not! Yikes.

[leftygirl02]

Yes, he sleeps with a machine-fire snorer. lol. I know that feeling. And being Shane he just thinks he'll go on and sleep elsewhere.

Mitchie nooooooo! Oh Mitchie.