I geuss its sort of cliché to like frank's stuff but i really do and not just his daring designs but how he perfected the use of 50's style (well it was the 50s) horizontal lines and how he incorporated nature into the buldings and also how he manipulated the human mind to draw your attention to or away from someplace (creating a predictable flow through the bulding) and instead of writing in short, choppy and sometimes incomplete sentence this is one long gramatically incorrect pseudo sentence!(wiuth an exclamation mark!!!)
crap you are right i do have a problem with that thing ill have to talk to toren tommorow maybe he can help me if not there is always next year but i best fix this problem i have this one doesnt even have commas it rocks!! or a capital letter at the begining!
If I was your English teacher, I'd give you a C. The content's there and the imagery's stunning, but you really need to work on that whole "one run-on sentence being a five paragraph essay" thing.
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