Comments | legalblonde2005: Post-ep S/V fic.

legalblonde2005

Post-ep S/V fic.

Jan 27, 2005 00:15

This is what comes of TWO snowstorms and being sick. A angsty-schmoopy S/V post-ep. You've been warned.

Title: A Thousand Gaps
Ship: S/V
Rating: G
Summary: "A hundred gaps, a thousand places in his life where Sydney should have been, but never was. It became habit, after a while, to fill her in."

( A Thousand Gaps )

Comments 23

scout27 January 27 2005, 13:38:10 UTC

Oh holy mother of all that is good.
This is absolutely beautiful. It's so poignant, and the way it should have been, and so true to the way I would imagine Vaughn feeling and the regrets that might have filtered through his head at times when he just couldn't see a reason to go on.
I seriously...have tears in my eyes right now...that was just so amazing. I'm sorry you're sick darling, but I have to say...I'm so glad this came out of it. The perfect afterthought to an amazing episode last night.

Catch him in the right moment, when his guard is down, and he'll tell you he bought a ring.

Perfection...plain and simple.
Must go read again.

legalblonde2005 January 28 2005, 17:38:58 UTC

Wow, such high praise! Thank you so much for the feedback, I'm so happy you enjoyed this ficlet.

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legalblonde2005 January 28 2005, 17:41:30 UTC

Thank you! You know I can't resist tortured, introspecitve Vaughn!

slave2tivo January 27 2005, 15:44:32 UTC

This story is beautiful and heartbreaking, but above all it is perfect. It is such a wonderful companion piece to last night's episode. The Vaughn reflection and filling in the gaps seems a natural thing to do. I must go read the story again.

I am sorry you are sick. I hope you feel better soon.

legalblonde2005 January 28 2005, 17:42:17 UTC

Thanks so much. It seemed like the most logical explanation for that SB story, IMO. And thanks for the well-wishes; I am feeling a bit better.

austin360 January 27 2005, 15:55:26 UTC

My shippy heart thanks you. This was *lovely*.

legalblonde2005 January 28 2005, 17:42:52 UTC

Happy to add to the shippyness! Thanks!

magi_47 January 27 2005, 16:04:21 UTC

Aww. That was such a well-written piece. Very poignant, romantic... you captured what it almost seemed like was really going through his head last night. Very beautiful to read. :) You are an excellent writer.

legalblonde2005 January 28 2005, 17:43:30 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!