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[fanfic] Burning Euryale

Apr 02, 2010 04:16

Title: Burning Euryale
Author: legare_virtuoso
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Death, spoilers for Future Arc.
Prompt: VI - 48. Chrome - fighting a battle by herself; “And as the fear grows, the bad blood slows and turns to stone.”
Word count: 2034
Summary: She’s getting good at the art of killing people by herself.

Author Notes: I actually rather like Chrome. I ( Read more... )

character: dokuro chrome, fandom: katekyo hitman reborn, fanfic

Comments 13

yamamotokun80 April 7 2010, 09:31:00 UTC

wow... so good...
honestly, your fics are good...
It explores the possibilities of every character...^_^

P.S. Check this story's link on your post on KHRFest and hitman_reborn. When I press it, it leads me to your X80S fic...

legare_virtuoso April 7 2010, 14:49:20 UTC

Sankyuu. I tried to do Chrome as just... Chrome. It's a level of difficult I didn't appreciate.

Eff. *fixes* Can you tell I was tired and used copy pasta? Yeah...

jesheslove April 7 2010, 18:23:10 UTC

Fffff, I play the videogames too, and I can't help but play as her everytime. Y Y Y up+Y up+X Special Attack Combo Spam!!

Wonderful work~<3 This is going straight into my memories! :D

legare_virtuoso April 7 2010, 18:38:40 UTC

Ffff yes. Chrome is my image on my player card, not because I picked her, but because I play her ALL THE TIME.

*perks up* I finally did something memory-worthy? EFFF... YEEEEEES now everyone in the room is looking at me funny

teruame April 8 2010, 00:07:51 UTC

Beautiful...:D This is just so beautiful, and so Chrome. I wish I could write with such beautiful expanded characterization. <3333

And your words...so damn pretty! *__*

legare_virtuoso April 9 2010, 00:00:01 UTC

OK... took me awhile to stop flailing over the praise. I swear, I'm likely to start up again, so let's make this short.

Thank you very much for enjoying my work~<3

lilac_ayame April 8 2010, 09:47:05 UTC

Wow, awesome. I wanna see this Chrome in cannon. Though hopefully not as bleak, maybe?

I want to see the reaction of the back ups (both Hibari and Mukuro) and later Tsuna.

Please? *puppy dog eyes*

legare_virtuoso April 9 2010, 00:44:00 UTC

If this Chrome showed up in canon... lots of explosions would happen and many people would cark it.

........

You know, normally I'd say no, since this is like... a characterization oneshot. As of now, I'm putting a sequel to this on the 'considering' pile.

lilac_ayame April 9 2010, 02:44:27 UTC

Well, you make the characterization so awesome that I can't help want to see some outsider's pov. It won't hurt to try, anyway... so I'm already happy enough that you put it in 'considering' pile :D

legare_virtuoso April 10 2010, 06:07:29 UTC

... You realize it's going to end with a new level of psycho, right?

I mean, I can TRY. I'm just giving the heads-up in advance that it's most likely either not going to end up this awesome or it's going to be depressing.

melissa_42 April 11 2010, 11:04:32 UTC

Crap, I don't know how I missed this one! This was my prompt, and you went above and beyond with it. If Reborn were a darker manga, this is exactly what I would like to see done with Chrome's character. She has so much more potential than people give her credit for, and I'm glad you highlighted that.

Plus, I love your writing style ^^

Eep! I need a Chrome icon!