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leggymimi

Stale Bread

Mar 24, 2013 02:59

Title: Stale Bread
Pairing(s): JunSeung
Rating: PG-13+
Word Count: 1,080
Summary: Two psychotic lovers collapse under monotony.
A/N: Late night musings. I don't know where I was going with this.

( Hyunseung started screaming and shouting and clawing at him in a blind, fixed fury. )

fanfiction, pairing: junhyung/hyunseung, rating: pg-13

Comments 9

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leggymimi March 27 2013, 03:07:05 UTC

indeed, indeed. I don't write them so this was like whaaaaaat am i'm doing.

You thought it was sexy, too? It confused me too because I mean what they're fucking fighting and nearly about to kill each other so what the hell? But yes yes, this thing between them happens all the time. Their fighting is kinda like their spice in their relationship........? Seung is defffff a wild cat. Perfect comparison. He cannot be tamed.

Dysfunctional, yet it works, yeah? Glad you liked iiiiiiiiit~~ <33333

akaipenguin March 24 2013, 16:27:14 UTC

tell me again why i love you so much ( ... )

leggymimi March 27 2013, 03:47:21 UTC

yes why do you love me i am a bitch.

u___________________________________u MY ANGST IS KIDDY! OTL I do not feel that it is angsty enough. D: Like some people can go to extreme. I strive to go to that extreme but I can't and i fail. D:D:D:D:D:D: I did a good job? Yes? Okay. ^^;;;

ahhh poor doo. He will never get a break. BUT HE DOES NOT DESERVE ONE. ESPECIALLY AFTER KILLING WOON. NO. THAT IS UNFORGIVABLE. But yeah how junseung can go from about killing each other to fucking is amazing. yaaaaahnnnnn... when it is close to bedtime my mood decreases so i get ideas like these in my head. That's where this came from! I wanted to kill somebody! :D I'm psychooooo. yes hyunseung almost killed jun. rather hilarious. and disturbing.

AND I LOVE YOU LOVE I DON'T DESERVE YOUR LOVE. QAQ

<33333333333

obsessionisyun March 25 2013, 04:59:35 UTC

bbbbbbb! why didn't you tell me that you're gonna post? kuagbs omg iloveyouuuuuuu thank youuuuu goona be reading this bye

leggymimi March 27 2013, 03:24:54 UTC

u__________u I'm bad at communication. no really I suck at getting with people and talking. but yeah i see you liked it xDDDD

akinoyui March 25 2013, 05:09:33 UTC

T___T I miss reading a GOOD Junseung fic. Thank you SO much for posting this. BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL *cries tears of happiness* Junseung is always so tensed...and complicated. It's beautiful.

leggymimi March 27 2013, 03:23:13 UTC

oooooh you're welcome bbbbb!!! I was thinking of doing some junseung for a little while but was unsure how it would turn out so i stopped planning and just went off the top of my head and this is what I got. ^-^U NO SERIOUSLY. I'M GLAD THAT YOU APPROVE. OTLOTLOTLOTL I LOVE YOU. <33333333333333

seasaltcream March 26 2013, 07:36:39 UTC

I don't know why but this is kind of the relationship I always expected Junseung to have. And I really liked the pacing of it because both of them use empty threats to try to one up each other but in the end they both fall victim to their passion which is really.. really their downfall and what keeps them together! I enjoyed this a lot honestly. Love your writing :)

leggymimi March 27 2013, 03:18:29 UTC

junseung is so angst ridden it's not even funny. like I dunno why but crazy death plots are the norm for them so i was just like eh. let's add in a little psycho, too, yeah? :) ohhhh you described it perfectly!! They can empty threat each other all day long but at the end of the day they love one another in their own special crazy psycho way. it's kinda beautiful. scary and beautiful.

yaaaah i love you~~~~ Thank you darling for your sweetness. <33333333 u///////////u