Château de Versailles (1/?)

Apr 15, 2013 01:07

Title: Château de Versailles (1/?)
Pairing(s): DooWoon
Rating: PG-13+
Word Count: 6,189
Summary: Yoon Doojoon is a decorated police officer of New York City. Away from work, he is also the spouse of a sweetheart and a doting father of their triplets. He has brought countless criminals to justice, but one will bring him to his knees.
A/N: First ( Read more... )

fanfiction, rating: pg-13, pairing: doojoon/dongwoon

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obsessionisyun April 15 2013, 10:32:49 UTC
why you no tell me??? reading this. bai

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leggymimi April 17 2013, 03:42:55 UTC
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really? super really? <333333 my heart is touched bb........ PLEASE ENJOY THE NEXT PARTS LOVE.

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akaipenguin April 15 2013, 13:51:13 UTC
Yoseob. omg. YOSEOB??? Mind blown. I literally thought of Hyunseung when you wrote "My husband's head off!" then you said, my husband (i read it again) and knowing that you write Junkwang fics I thought it was Gikwang (and the fact that you wrote short male earlier) but Yoseob. dammit. im probably the only fail here who didn't think of yoseob. /shootsself

This fic... I totally loveeedddd the starting and the whole triplets and awesome stuff and omg their next baby was awesome tooooo!!! But this happened. i hate you Yoseob. I officially hate you for kidnapping 3 babies and a gaint baby. idc if Doo shot your husband i would shoot you too if you do something stupid! ZAI AM WATCHING YOU YOSEOB. I WATCH YOU IN YOUR SLEEP LIKE HOW CREEPY EDWARD WATCHES BELLA IN TWILIGHT. /fades into thin air

And tbh i thought it was more of a smut fic or fluff fic when i read your summary~ XDD im sorry this penguin is horrible and she should be put into jail or in a white room... ><

Thanks for this!!! <33333 LOVE YAAA!

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leggymimi April 17 2013, 03:57:38 UTC
CUTIE YOSEOB. c: omg and no do not think you fail because I didn't think that I made it obvious enough that Seob was the bad guy ;;;; like I think I failed at describing him though I wanted it to be a surprise kind of TTTTTTTTTT YOU DID NOT FAIL I FAILED.

omggggg I love babies. I LOVE DOOWOON BABIES. *V* And they're gonna have another one 8'DDDDDD You know initially I was gonna have Dongwoon be killed but you know. I couldn't...........otl......I couldn't do that to him. I can't keep killing him QAAAAAAA< "I officially hate you for kidnapping 3 babies and a gaint baby" If you meant "giant" baby then I fucking love you because that's EXACTLY WHAT DONGWOON IS. A GIANT ASS BABY. I GIANT ASS KANGAROO. <3 Seobie is in the denial stage. *nod* I think that's why he's very hostile. Or he's just crazy. Edward is a creep.

OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGFKJGDFGKDFSLKGJFGHSDFGHFDHJSFFDHFJHS YOU DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIID!?!!!?!?!?! YOUR MIND. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT. SUBMISSIVE DOO FUCK YES. OH MY GOD I'M CRYING. <3333333333333333333333 I EVER EVEN THOUGH ( ... )

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akaipenguin April 17 2013, 04:15:44 UTC
Ani ani unnie you didn't fail... it was me... who failed to work my brain... and my failed brain... I BLAME FURTHER MATHEMATICS FOR THIS!!!

and OMG HAHAHAHHHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA GIANT ASS KANGAROO OMG I LOVE THIS!! HAHAHAHHAHHHAHHAHAAHAAHA I SHALL CALL WOON THE GAK NOW!! XDDDDDD OMG I CANT STOP LAUGHING AT YOUR REPLY!!! OMG /ROOLLLLSSS AND NOOOOO DONT KILL WOOONNN KILLL DOO INSTEAD!!!!

... okay nevermind ignore that... I'll do that... XDD

AND HAHAHAHAHHAHHA EDWARD IS A FREAKING CREEP ALRIGHT!! XDDDDD he's not even handsome!!! /gets shot but random twilight fans BUT STILL 8DDDD YANGYO YOU KILL MY GIANT KANGAROO AND YOU OUTTA WATCH OUT. I'LL MAKE THE BABIES MURDER YOU IF YOU ANYTHING TO DOOWOON!

AND OMGOMGOMGOMG YOU LIKE MY MIND??? I LIKE SICK THINGS AND CRAZY VIOLENT STUFF AND BLOOD AND SMUT AND AND AND... forget it... /moves so that you have space in my white room

AND I LOVE YOU TOOOOO!!! ;DDDDDDDD <333

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3star4life April 15 2013, 19:08:51 UTC
SPOTSPOTSPOTSPOTSPOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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3star4life April 17 2013, 05:27:08 UTC
I can't get over this! I just can't! I mean...AHHAHFJALJFLAKJFLJLK JLKJFALJFLKJAL KJFLJ LKJLALJJFLJALFJALFJLJFLKJALFKJLKFJLJFLA

LOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THHHHHIIIIISSSSSSSS SO MUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!


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3star4life April 17 2013, 05:36:51 UTC
Oh wait though....you...used me...as noona....O_O I'm Wooniee's Noona?????

... )

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3star4life April 17 2013, 05:44:55 UTC
He begins kissing my neck-which is nearby. I feel him inhale my scent. He ghosts the tips of his front teeth against my skin first before those forever moist cushions touch down. I feel my heart skip. I hone in on my lover. Dongwoon takes this advantage. His divine lips swipe mine into very deep morning kisses.“That right there is why there may be another one of these on the way,”
The smut. The smut.

But hold up! Wooniee is expecting!!! Awwwwww. I remember us talking about how DooWoon would have an immense amount of babies because they just can't stay away from each other and you prove that here! Well, yes.

“I’m pretty sure I am pregnant. I feel different… just like I did when I was carrying the boys. After a while, I could tell. I felt something was there; I feel the same way now. It’s hard to explain.” Oh wifey Wooniee, you little cutie-pie, you!

“Maybe this time I’ll get one that looks like me, huh?”Dongwoon’s head falls back as a laugh sprouts from his throat.“They laugh at everything I do, they love to roughhouse, and they ( ... )

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MAY?!?!?! vonegirl1 April 16 2013, 04:48:40 UTC
Come on! Oh, I see. Hook us and watch us squirm. Well played. Seriously, I'll be waiting for the next installment. Great start. Yoseob, bad guy. Yeah, yeah I like it.

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Re: MAY?!?!?! leggymimi April 17 2013, 03:49:01 UTC
YESOMGMAY. Middle May, probably. I have so many papers and exams OTL....... himnaeeeee.

>:D YES. YOU GOT IT RIGHT. That is my technique. But you know, IT TORTURES ME TOO BECAUSE I ACTUALLY HAVE TO WRITE IT. BUT IT'S A GOOD KIND OF TORTURE YOU KNOW? ;;;;;;;

The start was good? u//////////u <33333 yaaaahhhh thank yoooou...... I hesitated a lot about this. ><;;

And I freaking love bad guy Seob because it's different. He's so cute so how is he possibly menacing~? Heeeee~~

Thanks for reading babe~~ <33333

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Re: MAY?!?!?! vonegirl1 April 17 2013, 04:20:21 UTC
Good luck on all the work you have ahead of you. As usual, I'll be looking out forward to another post.

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Re: MAY?!?!?! leggymimi April 18 2013, 00:17:19 UTC
THANK YOU LOVE ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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