Would it sufficed if I simply said you killed me and sent me to heaven just by reading this?
I have missed reading your stuff.. /forever ashamed
But I still come back to reading your DooWoons when time permits me to. But you don't write enough JunWoon. Damn it, if you write all your JunWoons this hot from here on out, I'll gladly write out my will in preparations for the multiple deaths.
Omg this was soo hot~ I love JunWoon, but unfortunately there isn't a lot of fic on that ship :( but still I really enjoyed this! Ooh would you consider writing a sequel? But this time a 2JunWoon threesome with Woonie in the middle? ;D lol just the thought of that... :3 omg~ Anywho, once again great job!
Re: SPOTSPOT!!!moonbeamkisssJuly 30 2013, 04:57:53 UTC
Ahhh, I see JunWoon & I haven't read a JunWoon in forever, an NC17 ONE! So naturally I get more enthusiastic than I possibly should. It starts off with Doo coming in with a very slutty & adorable Woon. aljljkljlkjljlkjljfljlkjkljljljljljl Do you understand how much I love this combination of slutty & cuteness???!!! Do you understand that Wooniee is the only one that can ever pull this off??!! ahhhhhh And what better way to start off a JunWoon than with a dash of DooWoon?
Doojoon then followed the heavy ass-smack with a gravely “Get your ass in there,”
Re: SPOTSPOT!!!moonbeamkisssJuly 30 2013, 05:38:48 UTC
“………You don’t really talk much, do you?” “Not with people I don’t know.” “Do you want to get to know me, hyung?” Dongwoon hummed boldly, dropping his lids in sultry increments. He was officially done with the chatter.He was done with this waiting game. He unremittingly inched nearer and nearer to Junhyung. Junhyung swallowed. “I’m busy right now.” “I’m not.” “I have to finish this paper.” “What paper?” “This paper.” “When is it due?” “Midnight.” “It’s 7:54 in the morning. You’ve got ample time.Take a break…” Dongwoon licked a single path from the base of Junhyung’s neck and up to the tip of his earlobe. And Junhyung let him. Dongwoon stared at him. “You don’t want to fuck me?” he pouted, “am I ugly, hyung?” “No.” “Then let’s have fun.” SIDENOTE from all the sexiness going on here but your writing style[s]!!! lol This type of choppy-direct-dialogue reminds me of this Hemingway[I think it was Hemingway] story I read for English and I absolutely adore it
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I don't know why but each time I read one of your junwoon's stories, I feel like Doojoon is nothing but an ass (or getting near to that). I don't know why I get this feeling. In this fic, Jun and him are such opposites. I'd have loved reading more about their interactions (but that's because I love 2jun so much, I guess) but since the focus was about junwoon, I'll wait for another story of yours ;)
Dongwoon is such a personnage. I guess it's really hard to resist him. I admire how Junhyung tried until he failed.
And then you unleashed the beast. Woon got to have such a hard but delightful time with Junnie. This piece got me really high and wanting more of this. More of Junwoon. But even more, more of 2junwoon. Is that bad??
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BEE YOU KILLED ME I COULDN'T STOP READING NOT EVEN TO QUOTE THE PARTS THAT I LIKED THE BEST I- ;A;
I love you <3
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I have missed reading your stuff.. /forever ashamed
But I still come back to reading your DooWoons when time permits me to. But you don't write enough JunWoon. Damn it, if you write all your JunWoons this hot from here on out, I'll gladly write out my will in preparations for the multiple deaths.
Love you BB <3
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Anywho, once again great job!
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And what better way to start off a JunWoon than with a dash of DooWoon?
Doojoon then followed the heavy ass-smack with a gravely “Get your ass in there,”
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“Not with people I don’t know.”
“Do you want to get to know me, hyung?” Dongwoon hummed boldly, dropping his lids in sultry increments. He was officially done with the chatter.He was done with this waiting game. He unremittingly inched nearer and nearer to Junhyung. Junhyung swallowed.
“I’m busy right now.”
“I’m not.”
“I have to finish this paper.”
“What paper?”
“This paper.”
“When is it due?”
“Midnight.”
“It’s 7:54 in the morning. You’ve got ample time.Take a break…”
Dongwoon licked a single path from the base of Junhyung’s neck and up to the tip of his earlobe. And Junhyung let him. Dongwoon stared at him.
“You don’t want to fuck me?” he pouted, “am I ugly, hyung?”
“No.”
“Then let’s have fun.” SIDENOTE from all the sexiness going on here but your writing style[s]!!! lol This type of choppy-direct-dialogue reminds me of this Hemingway[I think it was Hemingway] story I read for English and I absolutely adore it ( ... )
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Dongwoon is such a personnage. I guess it's really hard to resist him. I admire how Junhyung tried until he failed.
And then you unleashed the beast. Woon got to have such a hard but delightful time with Junnie. This piece got me really high and wanting more of this. More of Junwoon. But even more, more of 2junwoon. Is that bad??
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